rate_review Reviews

I'm coming into this a bit into the story, but I just spent the past few hours reading through the whole thing and I'm absolutely hooked. I can't wait to read more and I feel so weird saying that because I've never liked Seifer/Squall before. Lol.

I eventually leave a proper review, but I'm still taking it all in, so for now, all I can really think to say is: Wow. I REALLY love your writing; I can't wait for more.

Don't worry about the lapse between chapters. As long as you keep writing I'll keep reading, I love your stories. Looking forward to the next installment.

-ZE

At least you updated! Glad to see it. ^^ This was amusing to see how both of them are starting to change in this situation without loosing who they are.
~leaf~

Ooh, poor Squall. That must've been torture seeing Seifer with Alex! I'm glad that he knows Seifer wants to date him though. I wonder how Lore will react? I cannot wait for a chapter with Lore musing over his parentage, but that will be even more exciting if it's drawn out more. If not, well oh well hehe. I assume Lore will have plenty of time to think about that after he finds out about Squall and Seifer dating (if they do of course).

school come first. ;9 pleasin' the masses, second.

THANK u for the treat! An appetizer to tie us over until you can update again. Sweetness... much much sweetness to look forward to! And Squall finally GOT it! yaaaaaaaaaay.
Yup yup... of course, [standard clause] Can't wait for more, but I will. I'll wait. ^____________^ S'worth the wait. S'wooooooorth iiiiiiiiiit~~~~

Love the story so far, you are very, very talented! Pleeease update soon, I can't stand waiting! :P

Hey, this is my first time reviewing on AFF, i'm usually just a lurker ^_^, i really love this story, and am so glad you updated, i've been checking in on it a couple times a week. This is such a great story, to be honest, i usually find the whole idea of mpreg a bit retarded, but this story is just wonderful, the whole dynamic of seifer and squall is perfect, and i can't wait to see seifer and lore's relationship develop.

thanks so much for sticking with this story too, so many great stories just get discontinued, its not even funny. Good luck with writing it, and please know you will always have a patient and happy fan in me

D xxx

I've told you before how much I love, adore this story and how well the characters are written even with all that talk going nowhere it was good stuff kept me intrested, but I just wanted to throw in my two sense my friends write final fantasy's plug Linkin Fantasy, but in all their stories Seifer smokes which look sgreat on him to take his hotness up a knotch I'm not saying for this story but for future stories you should think about it, but for now keep doing what your doing your fantastic at it no matter how long it takes, you work that!!

Oh how wonderful! Jealous!Squall. You can't help but love it. Thank you so much for the awesome update and I'm hoping for another one soon but please don't stress youself about it. This is a story worth waiting for.
~Loki

omfg!!! That was so hott!! The ammount of emotional and sexual tension in this story is so intense that my grandchildren could probably feel it. I'm so happy that you updated and I can;t wait for the next update. College is such a bitch I'm sure yet I can't wait to start this year. PLZZ UPDATE SOON! This is the perfect spring break gift!!