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for Defining Love

by DB2020

person Anon
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wah~! I love this chapter. I love how you write the chracters of Squall and Seifer. They sem so beleivable. ^^V
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wah~! I love this chapter. I love how you write the chracters of Squall and Seifer. They sem so beleivable. ^^V
person bouncing_baby_bunny
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay you finally updated..i was sad i really really thought you weren't gonna continue...this is probably one of my favorite chapters. As soon as i read that seifer brought another woman i just knew that squally boy was gonna get fired up..awww jealousy. I totally love the some what relationship squall and seifer have. P.s I like where this chapter is headed. LOL
person Sandy
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see you haven't given up on that story cause I enjoyed it from from the very start! Have a nice spring break too!
person Infek
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's wonderful to finally see them coming together and both of them acknowledging their feelings for eachother. Great writing!
person asialisek
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**whimpers**
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so hows it going? haven't seen an update for a few months now just wondering whats up? I love it by the way! I can't believe Seifer is realizing feelings after all this time!
person Brit
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually found this story a few days ago and have been working on reading it between class, work, and sleep. I don't know if you've had anyone else comment on it, or if it's something that you've thought about, but the story has a good flow overall. Yaaaay! I'm really looking foward to how Seifer and Lore interact. I really hope that they talk about the missing pictures from the boxes of pictures. But, I look foward to when you update no matter when it may be. =)
person Akira
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I can't wait until the Seifer and Lore parts of the story! Of course you already know that from my last review lol. I'm wondering if Seifer will eventually end up accepting Lore as his son too and love him just as much as Squall does. If that happens, hopefully Lore would feel the same or that would bring lots of new problems into their lives hehe. A parent and a child who are both as stubborn as these two might give a good laugh. Awesome story so far, I love it!
person florinoir
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seify, Seify Seif...*Hyperion's tip at my troat*I mean,great Alamsy-sex-god... Hem...
/Seifer/That's better...
/Squall/*snort*
...You really think he will make a scene? It's Squall!!
/Seifer/Yeah...But I'm me...*cocky grin*
...Okay...
Good continuation!!(poor Irv', he just try to help..sort of...)^^