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me again!
sooo goood!
you are one of teh best writers I have ever read.

OMG!I just happened to leave a review, and clicked back and there was another chapter!!!!!!!!!! and smut no less!!!\0/
omg, so hot, so good, so long in coming!!!!Fell free to drag out as many sex scenes as yuu want!
....have I mentioned I love you!!
please* don't make us wait so long for more, some of us might wither away!!
god you're good...I need a cigarette.

The sex scene was pretty long, but the way you described things worked very well. It was a lot to need to get across and just wasn't going to happen in a short amount of time.
Good luck with your classes!
~leaf~

Ah. That confrontation was both amazing and humourous. :3 I love this story and I can't wait for the next update.

*showers you with rose petals and cookies*

Once again, excellent job with the latest chappy! Irvine's behavior makes me both cringe and want to hug him...not quite sure how you consistantly manage this, but you do it very well. He's so the perfect overprotective brother with a deeply buried attraction to Squall; and lucky Seifer gets to exploit the living crap out of it ^_^ Nicely done, always look forward to seeing more from you.

another great chapter although I am wanting more advancement to the story, lol love reading but seemslike its takin forever for them to get anywhere with things.

I've had a few months of both this and that, thus making me fall behind a bit... but now I got 3 action-packed chapters to read. And I loved every single second of it. Godlike work as always. You sweep me up in the story with your way of handling the words and damn!! Yeah - you're good and you know it :D

Thank you for the angst, lemonesque, somewhat cute and cuddly - chapters. I really enjoyed reading them.

This just continues to excite me. I can't wait for the next chapter.


-ZE

You give us a little insight into Irvine's thoughts on this one, and Seifer's a bit more intuitive than one would usually give him credit for. All in all it's a good job. (And I know what you mean about the tests and chapters - I have the same problem with my stories - the faster I write them the more worried I am about the whole thing).

Oh, I loved it!!!! God, this chapter was so good!!! Thank you for bringing Lore back and the confrontation between Irvine and Seifer was something that was very much needed b/c it brought up a lot of unanswered questions. The biggest one being (to me) what the hell happended to everyone else!? When seifer asked that question I was like "where is everybody?" I mostly want to know what the hell Zell and Quistis is doing. Rinoa I don't care for, but I would like to know how she reacted to Squall being pregnant and if they were together when he first found out. I think you covered a little bit of the pregnancy story earlier but I don't remember, so if that seemed redundant at all, sorry. This was a great chapter believe me, you did well on it. It's definitely an A (read your a/n at the bottom). Please update soon and keep on making Seifer the sarcastic asshole we all know and love!