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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. Seifer is totally onto Irvine with the whole liking him. I think what Lore and Irvine don't realize is that they are too close to Squall to know what he really needs. That's where good old Seify comes in :D
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...excellent...the amount of difficulty Squall is having has the right effect I think. Wow....
Fantastic really. And a little sappiness is okay from time to time.
~Leaf~
Fantastic really. And a little sappiness is okay from time to time.
~Leaf~
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent new chapter! Gah, so much happening, and as always, I'm loving the dynamic between Seifer and Squall. The detective has my fangirl meter pinging a little bit, I like the character already, even though part of me isn't sure that I should just yet ^_^ The little car scene was most definitely long-awaited and hot...Seifer is so wonderfully, subtly changing to accomodate Squall. Keep up the fantastic work, always looking forward to seeing more from you!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly brilliant, i love the dynamic you have developed for squall / seifer's relationships in this story!! and always leaving poor seify all pent up, fantastic. i will await your next chapters with added fever.
keep writing magnificent stories, so i can read them :P
many thanks
Keiras
keep writing magnificent stories, so i can read them :P
many thanks
Keiras
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is coming along quite nicely. I have to wonder just what the Lieutenant was after - and what he will do with the information he got. It's almost a bit of foreshadowing - whether you meant it to be or not. I look forward to reading what you have up your sleeve next.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didnt think it was too much at all. The way you write Seifer is amazing. He seems to be slowly, ever so slowly, realizing his feelings for Squall, but he still remains the stuborn ass he always is(And I love). I was super excited to see that you updated to quickly. I'm watching closly, keep it up, i love it! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go get me some fish. Seifer made me hungry. ^,^
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was so good!!!! The part with seifer/squall making out in the car was really hot!!! God, you are such a good writer!!!! Please update soon because I miss Lore.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Seifer when jealous ;P
and by the way, the car scene WAS hot...
and by the way, the car scene WAS hot...
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, THAT was smart. Squall's probably already mortified that he's in the morning news--wait until he finds out, on the evening news, what the paparazzi have been busy doing around his home. It was bad enough he showed up at his apartment with Seifer, but then a make-out session? Nope, no twisted love square scandal fodder here . . .
~LS
~LS
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and this chapter was worth the wait but I really hope the wait for the next chapter isnt quite as long!