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Nice this is the longest fic I've ever read..i try to read others but they lose my interest after like 6 chapters, this one kept me interested from start to finish..when squall and seifer actually get together(hopefully they do)..it's gonna be awesome! Keep going!

Excellent new chapters! I really like the dark, unexpected turn this fic is taking, and I do really believe that Seifer is too much of an ass to be all gentle and sweet their first time. Much as it stomped on my little fangirl heart to see it happen, it just FITS. Squall's reactions to Cale's death are just so fucking perfect, too...not what readers were expecting at all, and once again, I just adore how much more depth you've given Squall. He's changed since the war, like most normal human beings do, softened a little in some areas, but just as tough as steel in others. Outstanding job, I can't stress how much I love that you keep me on my toes with this fic! Keep up the great work, I'm eager for more from you!

Wonderful Chapter, you did a great job with it i think. I'm actually quite glad that they DIDN'T have sex, amazingly -lol-
As always, will happily wait for more!
~leaf~

ahhhh!! makes me sad
very muchly. Yeas.
So gorgeous.
pwease dont take another month to update...
I'm too addicted to your fics.
I actually cant read anything else
D:

luck for yo' life

I thought Squall was perfectly in character. People change dramatically when a Death occurs( trust me, I know...). Are you going to have him go through the five stages of accepting Cales death? Just wondering. I'm addicted to your story. You should see me when I realize that there's a new update. I dance around the room and sing ^,^

Just would like to say: love this story. I haven't been able to get into fanfics lately due most just being senseless porn with no form of storyline (Damn PWP's) and most people's style of writing put me to sleep but this story kept my interest through the entire thing.

I beg you. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more.

FINALLY AN UPDATE!! i haven't reviewed before but i've been reading this for a while and the last chapter was so long ago that i was going crazy for an update.... i almost cried towards the end... i teared up but didn't cry *looks around* ok i cried i've been in a situation almost like that not identically but relatively and yeah it brought back memories... i can't wait for the next chapter...

I really LOVE your story. Although you kinda made of Seifer a really bad guy, I just can't hate him in this story. I like the more complex story you developped hire, and the different facets of the plot, like Lore and Squall's relationship for one. I'll be waiting for the next chapter as usual.

WOW, I wasn´t able to read some fiction because of my computer for quite a while, but to read you again is really great. I am sorry for Cale, but well Sei Sei is there to comfort and try to woo our porr devatated comander. I liked very mucho how you describe Seifer´s attitudes towards Squall, he is kind of cute when he tries not to be an asshole all the time.
So, anyways great fic, great characters.... and I really, really hope to read your next chapter and see what is going to happen, or how is going to develope this lustfull relationshio into a more lovely one.

Hope to read you soon.

It's understandable that Squall wouldn't be himself after what had happened - even the most seasoned masochistic killer would have a problem with a loved one (or someone they just cared about) being killed in front of them. I probably would have written it the same way. I happen to enjoy this story very much - and if I have to wait a while for an update I can do that. Take your time.