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for Defining Love

by DB2020

person xEVx
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm..... really looking forward to your update.
Hope that Lore will continue to be closer to Seifer. Love to know more on Seifer business.

d(^_^)b
person Trollmia
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grid Walls??? That was just brilliant. It really put a smile on my lips I tell you. And as always - a great chapter. And Seifer, he's just waiting for a good chance to bang Squall ain't he? :)
person florinoir
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squall!! Keep cool!! Seifer must drool and suffer NOT you!!
/Squall/ Shut up, I'm ashamed enought like that..
Wow, all that sexual tension...I loved this!! Still with Laguna and Lore next to them... And poor Cale!!! But he's too gentle for Squall, I think...
And this student... What a stalker...
Aniway, good continuation!^^
person corbin
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...its going just the right pace...though I think about throwing the laptop when squall and cale are together...it helps to know that eventually seifer will be with him...oh well, hope for the next chapter soon.Bye!
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-giggles- this was an interesting chapter. ^^ i look forward to more, totally understand and sympathize about the heavy semester though, so take your time.
~Leaf~
person kikvws
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I liked this chapter, especially how Seifer's dealing with his son. Sweet and subtle that he's holding back a little, but still not compromising his Seifer-ness ^_^ Looking forward to more from you!
person Brittny
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, don't worry. My Spring Break just ended today and I am having the worst
semester here as well. My grades suck and now I rarely get on the internet.
So anyways, this chapter was funny to me. I am glad Seifer ended up giving Lore
the hardcore truth. I was kinda worrying when he would get the message, but it's all good :D
person BritPride
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I check like... every day just to see if you've updated XD ^_^ I don't mine Cale but I still like Seifer better even if he's a total ass XD ^^
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy with the pace you're setting. You're right - with the way you've written the story so far, it would be - ahem - jumping the gun to put them together at this moment. I'm just wondering about Irvine and what he's gotten himself into. I look forward to your next update.
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
maahhh i love this but the wait for more chapters kills meeee..... get rid of cale really i don't like him.... gaahhh now i have to wait for another chapter but it's ok it's worth the wait