rate_review Reviews

Haven't been here for a while...
I like the idea of you taking things slowly. It gives us an insight on
what is going on with everyone's mind. ^_^ I'm curious to know if Irvine
will be able to go home without an ambulance escort.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Squall you moron. I hope Seifer beats the crap out of Irvine. Irvine treats Squall like a girl. Squall is pretty well capable of handling the situation on his own. I just wish Lore would give Seifer a go. He just doesn't want to know him. It's so sad! Lol Maybe Seifer can help Lore with girl issues as Squall can't hlep him there. There is something dodgy about Cale. I can just feel it! Great story!

Darling you take all the time you want it just makes me want to read more. Good chapter ^^
~Leaf~

I can't wait to see what Irvine has in store for the overbearing Ex-knight.

oooo Irvy is going to see Seifer...this will be interesting
It's okay that it took you a few weeks! -huggles- at least you updated!
^^
sooo excited to see what'll happen next ^^
~Leaf~

Excellent new chapter...loving the angsty mess going on between Squall and Seifie. I adore the way Seifer's coming across like a bad jingle that gets stuck in your head ^_^ And there's something kinda cute about Seifer sparring with Lore. It's very IC, totally selfish-motive behavior on Seifer's part, which doesn't surprise me, though further development wouldn't shock me, either. I love how you can make it work *cheers*. Looking forward to more from you!

Finally they got rid of the stupid *you must be logged in to review thing* I can now tell you how much I lovet his story! ^________^ It's wonderful! I like where it's heading ^.^ Thank you for being such a great writer.

I don't think I've reviewed this story before, but after having written in other sections, I know how much reviews mean. I love the characters in this, how realistic they all are, and the fact that I've been sucked in from the first time I read this. You have me concerned for Squall, wondering why someone so strong seems so fragile and is sleeping so much, wonderinghow excctly the pregnancy happened, and if the two will manage to get together with one another, even though Seifer, in true form, is being an idiot and an ass. I love this story, and I respect the dedication it's taken for you to write something that doesn't involve immediate gratuitous lemons, doesn't get the two together immediately. I can't wait to see where the story goes, as I check every day I'm on the site for sign of Defining Love having been updated.

I just wanted to say that I have throughly enjoyed this story so far. I like how you developed each characters personality. Most stories leave so much detail lacking, but yours fulfills all of my OCD need for dialog, background, plot, and character development. I am anxiously awaiting for the next chapter! Please update as soon as you can, so I don't go through a withdraw. LoL.

Oooh love this chapter! Can't wait for more Seifer/Squall action!

I'm getting a bit suspicious of all the rape references - Squall is so sure that he can protect himself from rape (even though Seifer has overpowered him numerous times) ... BUT I'm starting to get the feeling that Cale might not be as innocent as he looks. He seems to be overly 'obsessive' when it comes to Squall. He loves Squall greatly, but maybe a bit too much? Maybe he'll just totally snap if he finds out what happened between Squall and Seifer, then try to rape Squall? I dunno ... maybe my mind is just overthinking. lol

Can't wait for the next update!

(AFF is so evil making me have to register. lol)