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... oops I forgot to mention something - during the story you said that Squall hasn't been with many people. So I assume he is still a virgin? I wonder how Seifer will react to that if he finds out! Squall's a thirty-something year old virgin! Awww!

YAY! UpDATESSSSSSS! ILOVE THIS STORY!!

*happy squee* Gods, I adore this fic. I keep saying how much I love Seifie and Squall's interaction, and it's true...there's just so much love-you-hate-you chemistry there that it thrives. Always looking forward to more from you!

…Good work!! There just isn’t anything better to say.
You’ve really succeeded in catching the characters and keep them. Your plot holds and stays realistic, even the characters reactions and such. Like Seifer acting just the way he was before disappearing for seven years ;)

I really like this story. For having mpreg team, it is so realistic and… it’s like you can touch it. I like the natural twists in it and that the guys actually reached an age over twenty-five. There’s so few fictions out there with the characters being older that really holds. I’m quite addicted to this story and hope you’ll continue and stay strong with it.

this was a very good chapter, poor Squall...-pats him- i'm quite sure you have a lot more planned for those two ^^
~Leaf~

Honestly, I like the idea of Squall's first time being with someone other than Seifer. Don't get me wrond, I'm a major Seifer/Squall fan, but Seifer sometimes needs his ego deflated in a major way.

I don't dislike Cale at all and by descrpitions... he's hot.

There's something extremely sexy about a fully-clothed, wet Squall *huggles*. I really liked this chapter, and I have to say, personally, I also really like your version of Squall. He doesn't come across as passive to me, just a little more mature than the cranky Squall who glares at everyone in his path. Also, his reactions regarding his child fit very well psychologically, IMO. He was a young father, with no one else really in his life for sixteen years...it makes sense that there relationship would maybe be a little closer than usual.

I guess I don't really understand how anyone can view your version of Squall as "passive", because to me, he doesn't come across that way at all. He comes across like a single father who loves his only son fiercely. Not to mention all the hell he had to go through just becoming a father, he had to do it mostly alone, despite support.

I also don't get "victim" out of his interactions with Seifer. Not at all, actually. I'd call it chemistry, in varying states of denial and progression. He didn't just roll over and let Seifer have sex with him once he'd made his move; he doesn't really let Seifer get away with much of anything.

Well, I just wanted to give you my perspective on how Squall comes across in this lovely fic. I like that he's maybe gonna hook up with Cale. How else will he know what a good thing him and Seifer have going? Plus, I can't wait for Seifer to find out *pictures a cartoon Seifie shooting steam out his ears*. Keep up the excellent work, I'm always looking forward to reading your work.

I'm sorry... but... I WANT SQUALL WITH CALE~~~ You make Cale SO likeable, you know that!?! Seifer can go throw himself off a building for all I care, now that CALE BERNHEIN is in the picture~ Um.. yeah. But Seifer/Squall is okay... too.. I guess... Please do update more~ I'll give you cookies!!! and I'll draw for you!!! nyaha~

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NOOOO!!!!!!!! Squall's 1st time is in danger!!!! no!!!!! PLS DUN!!!
...i really wan squall n seifer 2 b 2gether... ToT...
so sad~~~ SEifer!! i cry for ya!!! T_T

nw, after dis hw's seifer's gona react?? can't wait.. i'm still sad though~~
seifer~~

update, update *chants*

Squall you idoit! Not with Cale. Seifer is the one. This chpater was great.

Please get the next chpater out fast. I'm dying to know what happens. Leaving us hanging with a cliffie!

I love Squall and Lore's relationship. I hope Lore develops a relationship with Seifer!