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for Defining Love

by DB2020

person seraphina
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG i just started reading this and you must must MUST update!!!! i love it!!! i totally can feel what Seifer's feeling and i sooooo hate that Cale guy.... i don't know something just screams do not like him.... i so love this fic
person ao
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O Unexpected, to say the least. I'm so glad Seifer got over the "EW HOMOSEXUALS" thing, and realized he's attracted to Squall. :O Though, the way he approached it was entirely Seifer-like-- like a fucking asshole. D:< XD
person leafzelindor
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoohoo update XD Wow i think Seifer just confirmed any thought in Squalls head that this *isn't* about him likening Squall the way he wants, and stuff...and here i'm sure that has a lot to do with what he really wants -giggles- Ahhh Seifer you just handle things so badly sometimes......a lot of times....whatever XD
mmm you're doing a lovely job dear!
~Leaf~
person Zillah
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seifer is so dense. *Shakes head* But then again, so is Squall.
It is amusing to read about their battling emotions and (inner) conflicts. And they are easy to relate to, which is something important in any story.

Happy New Year and may it indeed be filled with Seifer/Squall yaoi. ^_^
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy New Year to you too. Seifer being Seifer, even when he's trying to be nice he comes off as a bit self-centered. That's probably one of his strong points I guess. You write him so well. A confused Seifer makes for a very happy Leonhart29. Thanks!
person Nora
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, your Seifer and Squall are perfect. I also like Cale. (alot)
I wouldn't mind seeing Seifer sweat a bit over Squall. It wouldn't hurt for Squall to have some sexual experience before Seifer. Also, Seifer needs a jolt to his endless ego. (lol)
person kikvws
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see a new chappy from you! I really liked this one; probably Seifie and Squall's interaction is what had me going the most, it was so easy to visualize Seifer rifling through a box of pictures. You've piqued my curiousity about the missing pictures, though. Always looking forward to more from you!
person Ta Boo
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! And so quickly too! Kudos. ^^

Tee-hee Seifer being drunk is fantastic. And I love Squall's personality in this fic. It's just so .... Squall!

Fantastic chapter. Poor Squall is worried about "performing". XD. Seifer will have to remedy that.
person Brittny
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O Holy crap! I had to catch up on what was going on! Seifer has let his emotions get the best of him. *shakes head* And I am so glad Squall gave Cale a chance, even though Seifer deserves Squall more (go figure). Oh the drama.
person leafzelindor
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol nice job XD ahhh Seifer...you idiot....poor Squall though -pats him- he didn't need to get hurt....>.>.....seriously i can't decide if i like Cale or not -lol- sometimes i do and sometimes i don't..the rest of the time i just want Seifer to jump Squall...XD you're a good writer to make me feel like that.
~Leaf~