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Seifer is finally acknowledging his feelings for Squall. Finally.

Certainly a turning point in the story, this chapter. And nice little cliffhanger. Wonder who is going to help Seifer.

Liked it, alot more happening in this chapter compared to the others.

Can't wait till the next.

Somehow a drunk Seifer just seems right. I don't know what it is about him, but it seems like he only comes to grips with something when he's sloshed. Good update.

Is that your cliffhanger??
Just an update to me....nothing else..... I didn´t saw the meaning of it.
We already knew that Seifer is jealous.....
Seifer already knew that he was jealous.....
Squall knows that Seifer is jealous but doesn´t pays attention to the reason why..... as always.
Cale doesn´t loves Squall....he just lusts after him and wants to have sex if Squall lets him....as Lore and we already suspect.

Sorry...I am just in a horrible mood... but I really want to see some action in there...I am not talking about sex scenes (which I wouldn´t mind as long as they are SeiferxSquall)...but it would be really interesting to see more interaction between Seifer and Squall....no so much introspectives of the characters, and o fianlly see what the story is about.

Oh I forgot...I said I didn´t liked Cale...now I despise him!! All those kind of guys who just show his gentle face are the worst kind ever!!! (Expereinced in the matter of good wannabe men)

I hope to read a real chapter next....not a damn teaser.

"Let the love triangle begin." It's going to be quite the drama. Something tells me Seifer won't hesitate to use weapons against Cale.

This is quite the storyline you've got here. As always, glad for another update and awaiting the next.

What!!!! You just can´t leave the story like that!!!
I already love the idea of a jealous Seifer.....but I really despise the one of an oblivious Squall...come on give the guy more credit.

I also agree with Lore...there is something fishy about this Cale guy....and I simply don´t loke it......so I hope that somethign happens soon with those two so Seifer can finally coo our lovely Squall and also to start to win Lore heart and aproval.

really hope to read you soon.

Okay you've got me totally hooked, however i'm going to have trouble remembering to check for updates -lol- i suck like that, so update nudges would be appreciated? -lol- I'm enjoying your characterizations and all.
~Leaf~

*squee* I'm so loving this fic! Seifer and Squall's relationship gets more intense while Squall is going for Cale! It's so exciting! XD! I love Lore and Seifer bantering back and forth, it's so hilarious to read! However, I can't wait for Seifer and Squall to show some more progress, I love the two of them together. X) And I can see Seifer becoming attached to Lore in his own Seifer-way. Can't wait for the next update!

Seifer needs to get on the ball.. and soon.

I'm really starting to like Cale though, so I'm kinda torn right now. Though, I'm sure Seifer will win in the end.

I had to reboot my computer 3 times in 5 minutes and at 6 AM. Does this show how much I like your story? Yes, I got up especially for this. ^_^

Seeing Seifer's 'mark' on Lore come out, is really amusing when you put the two of them against one another.

And it's starting to become very clear how Seifer feels about Squall.

Another chapter nicely done.

I always get really excited when I see a new chapter for this. I hardly read any fanfiction these days because I can no longer stomach anything that's not well-written, with a plot and grammatically correct. However, if I see anything by you, I automatically no it's going to be good. So yes, good chapter. Seifer slowly coming into his attraction with Squall is perfect as is Lore's ability to banter on even ground with Seifer, rather than resort to icy glares. It works for Squall, but it's nice to see Seifer get a little bit of what's coming to him.

Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!