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for Defining Love

by DB2020

person YACUMO
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!!!

I really love all of you stories and really hope to read you soon.
Please amek it faster for Seifer and Squall to start to fall for each other....I really want to read you lovely lemons.

Hope to read you soon.
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, Seifer is showing the soft side I always knew he had - even if it has an edge of steel. I kinda feel a bit sorry for Cale though - I think he just lost Squall lock,stock and barrel.
person blue
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this story its soooooo awesome i love it! you are an amazing writer! please update soon? oh and would you send me an email alert when you do? i would be forever thankful!
person kikvws
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Lovely new chapter, I love Seifer's little internal struggle. This fic is progressing really nicely, I love that you're not rushing into things, not that you ever do! Can't wait for more!
person Brittny
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been here in a while...
Seifer obviously still wants Squall. X3 But Lore needs to accept the fact that his father should have a life too. *sigh* Irvine should tell him "oh well, he's dating no matter what you say." It's cute that Lore is overprotective and all, but Squall is the parent.
Haha I'm so into this story.
person Zillah
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is indeed an unexpected turn of events. Lore slowly changing his mind about Cale was about time, but Seifer starting to acknowledge his feelings for Squall? I didn't think that woul dtake another few chapters. But it's good that you do it now. Keeps the tension up a bit.

Good luck with the competition and thank you for updating!
person Rangiku
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY~~~~~~~~~~~ an update~~~ n wat a big turn of events.. lore relenting, seifer realizing his 'attraction' 2 squall, n squall is still oblivious~~.. NICE!!! *thumbs up*...

well, reading all ur updates after exam relaxes me.. still, all the best, n keep updating... u will alwaz be my fav Sf/Sq pairing author...

Keep up de good work~
person Jazzbo22
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love all your stories, and I can't wait to see where this one goes!! Please update soon! It's so good!
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As a fellow writer with a bit of the old "I can do it if I only applied myself" syndrome I sympathise with you. I am also very happy you updated when you did. I love this story and hope you continue it soon.
Leonhart29
person Dracoqueen22
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update! I've been waiting for this! The message left on the cell phone had me keel over laughing. Good luck on your novel writing! I haven't actually attempted one of those 50,000 onesvyet, too busy writing the full-length one, but its on my to-do list! Maybe when December starts. Thanks for the update! Hope to see more soon, but take your time, I understand the need to work on original stuff.