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for Defining Love

by DB2020

person Anon
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seifer + Squall = Perfection!!!

Those two go together perfectly. No other Final Fantsy 8 pairing can compare to these two. Plus, your writing is so surreal, just too perfect. You write both Seifer and Squall so in character and make their relationship a 100% believable and unbelievably hot!!!
person YACUMO
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must do a SeiferxSquall pairing.
You must not do a ???xSquall pairing.

You must do hot steamy attraction and Sex between those two.
You must make Seifer kiss, hug whatever Squall.

And most important....
YOU MUST UPDATE.

Hope to read you soon.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang good. I love all your work!
person Ta Boo
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I love this story.
Lore is such a cutie. I love how he's so protective of Squall. I'm very intrested in Cale's motives with Squall. Can't wait to find out if he truly loves Squall, or if he has an ulterior motive. Very interesting indeed.
I can't wait for Squall to get laid ... prefferably by Seifer (I wonder if Lore walks in. I'd love seeing his reaction to Seifer bedding Squall).

And you are the only person who has ever written a good MPreg story, in my opinion.
person kikvws
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An excellent update! I really loved Irvine in this one, how careful he's being to ensure Squall gets laid. And the little snippit with Squall and Seifer at the end was really cute; I could easily visualize them lying there exhausted, and talking. I like that you're taking things slow with this one. You're always very believable, but easing into it seems to fit his personality a little better for this fic. Excellent job, alwys looking forward to more from you!
person Zillah
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lore is turning into a little shit. *Mutters* Goddamn protective 16-year old brat.

Lore visiting Cale should prove to be exciting. Good job on the discussion between Irvine and Lore. You manage to see the things in the full perspective which is a big plus as an author. And the thing I find funny is that Lore is wondering mostly about Cale while Squall is constantly out with Seifer.

Best of luck.
person corbin
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.You're a great writer,and I cant wait to see what happens next...though I do feel for lore not wanting squall to date, this is almost borderline obessive...oh well,must remember that squall ends up with seifer...otherwise I'll be throwing things...I just dont like cale...anyways, cant wait for the next chaper of this and Somatic Memory...later
person kikvws
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic so much...especially adoring Squall and Seifie's interactions, as usual. I just can't get enough of the sweetness that's Lore, either; there's something so adorable about him calling Squall 'Dad'. Always looking forward to more from you!
person Shinra77
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can Sqall still get pregnant, I think that is somthing he should think about befor geting into a relashionship with a man.
person Brittny
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, Seifer is experiencing something.... X3
Their relationship is funny to observe. Poor Lore is a victim to Seifer's teasing.
I can't wait for the next sparring session. Will Seifer be able to control his hormones during battle?

P.S. I'm glad everything went well!