Reviews for Defining Love - Final Fantasy

person Zillah

schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Seifer's so rude! Absolutely hilarious. There is a clear resemblance between Lore and Squall when it comes to dealing with seifer which you nicely portraied.

As usual, I can only expect the best from you as an author. And thank Hyne that you're on active duty again!

person lilclily

schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM

what can i say, i love your stories. i never even considered squall and seifer as a pair before until i read ur work and now im hooked. its so obvious! but other than that, i seriously love your work and applaud your writing. keep it coming cause i am now an avid fan and await all and every new chapter that comes out. i hope u reach your dream as a professional writer (but dont forget to write more fanfics!:D)oh, the first story i read was protecting the lion, which i love as well as its sequels, and i really like how ur doing this story, even with the element of male pregnancy which is always a bit of a toughy to handle without making it wholly unnatural. keep up the good work!

person Shinra77

schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Dose Sqall have to be with Sifer I like Cale rather a lot, he seems to be a better mach, and Sifer dosen't seem intrested at all.

person Rangiku

schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM

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person Rangiku

schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM

i'm sorry the last review came out like dat!!! so sorry... something's wrong wid my com, or izit me??? nvm, still, like i said earlier, ur work s superb.. n d fact dat u update often.. haha, totally GreAT!! *double thumbs up*
Cale is cool, and that protectiveness makes him totally cute... haha... and i love how u portray seifer.. his cockiness n everything, makes him totally lovable.. squall seems a bit a lost now,but i'm sure u hav plans for him and i am totally lookin forward to it..
by d way, how's ur tooth comin out?? hell, the thing wid wisdom tooth are they are totally useless n cause u nothin but pain.. mine came out a few months ago n it's oni half out.. T.T.. my suffering is still gona continue but x matter wat, i hope ur dentist date will go fine.. hehe..
my final word... keep it up!!

P.S: good luck for ur exam.. T.T.. i'll be having my uni finals in 2 weeks.. can't read up ur fics till after exam... T.T... so sad...~~~ T.T

person Lady Shinigami

schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM

*screams* NOOOOOO!! Don't do this to me! *shakes DB* I want to KNOOOOW!! I bet Lore thinks Cale lured Squall back to his apartment after a lunch date and tried to have his evil way with him. Heh. Can't wait until Squall and Seifer hook up . . . Lore thought CALE was bad--at least Cale respects Squall's insistence on personal space.

~LS

person Dracoqueen22

schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM

*singing* Yay, update! I was waiting for this! And it came! And I'm happy. I found it amusing. Irvine teasing Squall was hilarious. I love how their personalities are still very much in character, even if they have somewhat 'grown up'.

I can't wait to see how this develops and how Lore reacts to Squall being at Cale's. Interesting! *rubs hands together in glee*

person Zillah

schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM

What I like about your writing style is that you don't rush things. Everything is greatly explained. Admittedly, sometimes I want to hit my computer when I still don't know how things are going to turn out eventually but this is a great incentive for readers.

Hope the wisdom tooth will heal well and thank you for already giving a sneak preview of how things are going to turn out. (S/S= ^_^)

person Hikaru

schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Owwwwww.... I`m gonna dig a hole and put Cale in there. Sorry the guy isn`t my God and I want Seifer kick his ass he he he.
Thanks for the quick update, good luck with the dentist(Hugs) , hey the idea of squall with cat ears is great, (counting the days left) and Update soooooon ^________^

person Brittny

schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Gee, now Squall has more stuff to brood over. I think he should go on a date with Cale (I mean, it doesn't hurt to try). Like Irvine said, he has spent most of his life taking care of Lore and working on missions that he barely had much of a social life. It won't kill him to try and balance dating with duties. But then again, Squall is too devoted... (which I support of course)
*sigh* It is up to Squall to decide. Now he has to hear Lore's opinion on the whole matter. *hugs them both*
I'm done. Sorry about your wisdom teeth. They are a pain in the ass. Mine decided to come through when I was in high school. -_- Then I have this one retarded tooth that may require surgery 'cause it's coming in all crooked. Bleh. Oh well, pain killers are the elixers of woman...man...whatever...
Looking forward to chapter 12!

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