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for Defining Love

by DB2020

schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Messing with Squall's emotions - you bad girl. I love it!
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much. Enough said.
person Brittny
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The battle scene was awesome. Just like old times...
Lore is such a sweetheart. *hugs*
Let's see, what else? Oh yeah...and the part where Squall and Seifer fall into the fountain made me laugh so hard for some reason. I almost suffocated (not joking). I guess because I could clearly picture them falling. *shrugs*
Great job. Need I say more?
person Dracoqueen22
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! I can't help but love Seifer and his assholeishness... Yes, I make up my own words. I love his goading, his taunting, everything about him.

Lore is actually an OC that I am enjoying. I can't wait to see where else this goes. I'm anxious for the next update!
person YACUMO
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!! It was really fun to imagine them fighting!!!
I really hope to read more of you soon....cause it is really shinning that attraction between those two seeds!!!
person kikvws
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for updates! You're so regular at updating the fics, though, it's amazing. I really like this chapter, there was a different feel to the swim coach (sorry, the name escapes me at the moment) that makes me really question his actual motives, especially since Lore's viewpoint isn't exactly without prejudice. I think I like the guy, and I really hate you for that ^_^ Too bad Squall's almost totally oblivious, na? Anyway, I'm enjoy the fic, and how it's progressing. Can't wait to see where you head next!
person Layla
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*reads the little A/N* .... *saves*.... XD! I WIN!
person Zillah
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist. The rivals are going to spar again. That always proves to give some sexual tension. ^_^
Somehow I had a feeling you had trouble with this chapter even before reading the A/N, but I am very glad to see the update. Wonderful work as we are used from you.

Best of luck with your mid-terms!

person Jicky
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooh how cruel, Seifer left for 10 years!? i seriouusly Fujin needa kick some sense into him. i thought they'd get back together long before they're 35! (i'm guessin Squall +co are around that age now) hmm i dun really like Cale, no offense, and i know u said Squall and Seifer would be paired together throughout the whole story, to me they're just meant to be together! (well i do read them pair with other, namely Irvine n Zell mostly, too. but here the 2 of them are THEE pair~) btw, OMG Lore is sooooooo cute. i dun care he's a little snotty, he'ss adorable, n the lion obsession is to die for LOL too bad u didn't write more chapters for the time btwn Squall finding out bout he's pregnant to Lore growing up, cuz that'd be so angsty n cute to read. but i like protective-Lore too. thou i'm not sure if he's got the concept Squall-daddy ain't interested into girls really. oh yeah it was fun to see Irvine too, definitely. the girls are a little creepy LOL, but teasing Irvine is quite cute~
another promising looking new FF8 work/piece!
i found this late nite n read it in one go, despite hw n RL... i really like it n hope it'll be even "beta" in the future (plot-wise, as in Squall n Seifer end up together LOL), so i hope my reviews not just babble to u. ^^'''
person Dracoqueen22
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I was haunting this site every day for an update for you and now I can rest easy in relief. Phew! That was good. Seifer's character is so perfect, as expected from you. And Lore, I must admit, he is the perfect blend of his fathers. The wordless communication between Seifer and Squall was intriguing and I'm still hedging on Cale. Must take time to ponder on this.

I'm sure this fix will last me a couple days but please... update soon! And good luck on your exams/midterms!