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for Defining Love

by DB2020

person corbin
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!Its great.Cant wait to find out what happens next!
person Brittny
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!
I don't have much to say, but I kind of expected Lore to search for Seifer. If I was in his shoes...I'd do it too. And Seifer is being so...childish *shakes head*. Squall pointed out something that I didn't even notice. But we all love Seifer anyway, right? :D

P.S. Ah yes, midterms. The most overwhelming part of college... >_< *fails college...then life* Haha just kidding!
person Pleased
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read up to chapter two and wanted to comment about your note at the end... lol. My son is seven years old and still clings to me, so there's nothing wrong with your portrayal of a six year old... especially when Squall goes out on missions and what not... His son would in fact probably be even clingier (is that a word... hah).
person Imawilburd
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow you became one of My favored Authors with Strings attached and the prequel. And this new story is great I presonally LOVE Mpregs.. lol gives the boys a feeling of what we go though. but love how the story is turning out and YES LOVE that Lore wanted to know in the end I figure if wasn't told and it went by years like how seif found out might turn out the same way... So looking farward to updates THANKS for the time you put into it!
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, well hurry up and develop them! Your trying to kill me! Keep writing! I think thats what i liked about Protecting the Lion so much, it was already finished when i started to read it. This is pure torture!
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person Dracoqueen22
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once more, another great chapter. I'm not surprised Lore wanted to know, curiosity is part of human condition after all. I don't think I'd be able to not ask. Even if I never cared to see the guy again, just knowing might be enough. ANYways, really cute with the season tickets and all. Perfect Squall-ness there, liked that a lot. Lore's character is truly an interesting mix, so I've learned. I'm enjoying him very much. I'm interested in seeing what's coming in the future. If it's not too much to ask, update soon!
person Zillah
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squall is getting soft-hearted. ROFL!
It shows that you're liking this story. And next chapter is going to be exciting! Lore gets to know his father a little better.
Thank you for updating regularly!
person Hikaru
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate Cale ¬¬
I Love Seifer and Lore, of course Squall, Laguna, Irvine... ^o^ Thanks for the fast update (hug)
person Sekre
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, lots of drama here ... At first I wasn't too sure about that ten year thing, but of course, you made it work out xD This Lore is as adorable as the little Lore - The protective thing is sooooo cute! Makes sense, I suppose, since that kid was always really clingy - I'm glad the Seifer traits shone through!!! Cause we alll looove Seifer's attitude (and body!). I'm glad Seif's back...sort of... It would be interesting to see how Lore and Seif would interact, as the truth continues to come out. And of course, your seif is sounding as hot as ever x) Squall, love him as usual. Not surprising he looks so young, as Laguna carries the same 'I'm half my age' looking thing. (On the subject of Laguna, the cake part was hilarious...I can totally picture him adding extra frosting to cover up the taste).

And, arrrggghhhhhh!!!! I'm so angry at you! (haha, not really) You had to give Cale silver hair??? He's supposed to be the bad guy, and you made him really hot! (-is a sucker for silver-) I'm actually looking forward to the pairing -wallows in shame- Heh, I think it's funny how Squally tries his hardest to stay out of everything, but ends up being the center of it all xD

Looking forward to more!!!
person Rangiku
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool, cool... way 2 good 2 b true.. dis is yet another masterpiece of yours.. i love ur fics, especially protecting the lion and the sequel... though u haven't finish dat.. still, never mind.. dis is another great fic.. though i'm a bit confused coz d time seem 2 fly in d fic.. haha/... still, those little things are pretty negligible since dis is a great fic overall. COOL work.. GOOD Job.. n i hope u update fast coz i hunger for more of ur fics.. Gambate!!!