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Loving the new update! I like the path you're taking with Seifer, easing him into the situation, instead of pushing them together unrealistically, like some fics do. I'm really feeling Seifer, I've gotta say; I think you've nailed him, and how he'd really react in a situation like this. Can't wait to see more from you; curious about the next chappie, to see if you really do take us ten years ahead in time. Either way, looking forward to more!

You've set up your story nicely, I honestly don't think Squall is OOC at all. Speaking as someone who has given birth to a little human being, once they come into someone's life most people would do anything to protect them, and that includes shooting a complete asshole in the thigh just for being where he wasn't supposed to be. It also means having the restraint not to do something as rash, so I give you lots and lots of kudos. I can't wait to find out what happens. Thank you for sharing with us.

Wow... I can imagine what Seif's going through though ... Knowing he has a son is not something he can /simply/ walk away from - And yeah, looong prologue, but I loooved every minute of it ^^ As for jumping ten years in time...Hm, I like little kids better than teenagers (they're so cute!) but I'm pretty sure there's a reason for a jump, so I'm eager for what ever you dish out. And I can't wait to see who else Squall 'gets' with ^^

Hey, long prologues can be a good thing, as long as you know how to write them. In your case, you wrote it well and didn't take forever and a day to get to the point. It was detailed and introduced the concept of Seifer learning that he has a son. Each chapter was important. At least it wasn't like...ten chapters. :O Besides, if you played Kingdom Hearts 2,then you should know the meaning of a LONG prologue (even though it was more of a 3 hour tutorial...). -_-;
I just don't think that jumping ten years ahead seems right. Will Seifer really push the thought aside over the fact that he has a son? Won't that bother him for ten years? I guess I don't know him very well. XD
That is all I have to say. If you REALLY want to write it, then go ahead. It's your story. Besides, I know that it will still be good either way.

Wow... a five chapter prologue and then a ten-year skip? I'm VERY interested now to see where this goes. What could have happened in this ten-year period? What does Seifer plan to do? And I'm really enjoying how you're still staying true to the Seifer character. He's such a bastard but you gotta love him.

o.O wow...well this line kinda makes me feel as if she's saying Seifer really isn't needed lol just what it made me think when i first read it. wha so sad >< haha lol please update soon!!

“Lore is such a dear. I hate to admit it, but I had my doubts about Squall raising that child. But since the day his son was born, Squall has been nothing short of all the family that boy will ever need.”

Gee, I never expected Raijin to say it of all people...but it does keep the suspense going. Your explanation of Squall's pregnancy does make sense so far. Ultimecia was one crazy bitch.
I am happy that you are updating so fast!

Ahhh, I wanna know what everyone is hiding ... I mean I got the idea, but yeah, ya know xD Love it ^^

I am very, very intrigued and very aggravated that there isn't more, lol. Please update soon. I'm dying to know when Seifer finds out what Squall is not saying. If that makes any sense.

Excellent! I'm really enjoying the fic so far; there are actually very few mpregs out there that I enjoy, but this is up in those ranks! I especially love what you've done with Squall, giving him his typical aloof attitude, but the little touches you've added bring out a sweet side where his son is concerned. Keep it up, looking forward to more!