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I really, really like this, but plz go back and double-check your grammar and make sure you're using the word you mean.
A bazaar is an open-air market. Something bizarre is out of the ordinary.
When someone's peeked, they looked. When someone's having a fit of pique, they're pissed off.
And there was an instance I noted where you forgot the 'ly' at the end of usually.
If you need a beta, contact me at winds_of_nocte@yahoo.com
I'd be happy to help. Kami knows my co-writer Strang leaves our editing to me. I'm a natural beta/editor/author. If you would like my help, I'm here. If not, I'll do my own thing.

i get butterflies when i see you've updated. Sometimes i squeal too.
occasionally, you've updated when i really needed something to take me away.
I've never found a ffviii fanfiction that matches yours.
i have trouble wading through other people's interpretations of Squall and Seifer
and i have hope that you'll deffs finish this :)
thanks for writing ya?
have a good one!

yay! You updated! Once again you have made an excellent chapter! The emotions and love are oozing out of my laptop screen man....

i'm so glad you finally updated!!! i've been waiting forever, and the wait was totally worth it!!! things are moving forward between our two guys and getting much more interesting :)

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssssssss!!!s-s-s-s-s-s-sssssss~~!!! LOL~ **jumps to read ch.45** XD

ch.45
yeeeeeeeeessss~s~s~~ X3

I like that you're bringing up the issue of the preg, but not necessarily committing to it happening again. i mean.. given the outstanding circumstances, peculiar as they may be, it's really kewl to have you write these guys dealing with the situation as a couple might in real life. Of course, that's not sayin' i don't hope u lean towards domesticating Seifer a little. LOL~ but at the same time he's too much of a wild guy still. And Lore? aaaah., what a mess. I lovely lovely mess.

THANK U FOR DISTRACTING ME FROM HOMEWORK TODAY! XD XD XD

Oh! You know what?
You're a FANtastic writer. When u start workin' on original stuff, wow.. oh man.. that'll be great. Totally really awesomely great.!!

And re-posted chapters???? .. sweeeeeeeet. ^__________^ Wow. Thanks again 4 the story! + the customary request of mooooooooore sooooooooon~ Loool. Wouldn't have it any other way.

^____~

Good chapter! My poor journal is never going to get published at this rate. I was supposed to be editing and formatting today before work. Looks like it'll have to wait until tomorrow now...

I found it interesting that you skipped the Squall at home scene and ghosted over his thoughts, but not in a negative way. I appreciate that as an author you realize that we as your readers understand what will be said between Squall and Lore at this point, and that we don't need to see it every time.

I look forward to your next update.

WOW!!!

I just your fic this weekend and i am blown away! I love the way you write your characters
and make them seem so real that you can just of brush off the whole MPREG thing as something
that happened...

I am so dying to figure out what happens next to Squall now that there might be a chance that
he's pregnant all over again because he didn't think that it was possible once again...
I also kind of want to know what will become of the loose GF Diablos... will it come back?
stay away? hehehe XD

Your writing style is so almost flawless that I find it more enjoyable to read your writings
than some of the more published authors out there (though the yaoi parts are a plus XD)

So keep up the good work and I'd so want to be able to read your next update! I'm such a fan now!!!

more more more mo~re more more more mo~~~re more more more more more more more mooooore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moooooooooooore~ laaaa lalalalala alallaaaalaaa lalaaaaaa

XD It's been too long! You spoiled us w a quick update last time, Lol. Of course, on top of that most insistent request is a BIIIIIIIIIIIG cherry with sprinkles on top. :9 And a nice, sweet, Pretty Pwease. ^____^ **a scratch to itch**

ohhhh maybe more mpreg? yes!! once again and always I love this story. Please don't change yourself. I fell in love with this story and the way you write few typos and all. I seem to find myself with more pauses in between checking, but as long as you write I will never give up on this story.I can't tell you how it makes me feel to come back and see when you have updated...its.. its like Christmas, the gift(story) is always great and you never disappoint or fail to make my day. I don't know, the complication of another kid appeals to me, in the situation itself and how the characters will react and deal with this, its what drew me too this story in the first place and unfortunately as readers we missed that part of having a kid, not necessarily the birth but ... the part of raising a child that would be unique to read with these set of characters ( can you see seifer.lol.... I giggle about it now) it's hard to explain and I don't wield the power of the mighty word like you do...but as usual I leave it up to you and your great skill and talent to lead me where you want me to go. I will ride with you and this story till the wheels fall off =)brst wishes, and hope things are well. Oh and please UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPDATEDUPDATED
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