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Hot hot hot. This is seriously the hottest, steamiest FF fanfic there is. *nosebleed*

I have to say that this is the last chapter I'm going to read. I'm actually not even going to finish the chapter because I'm just done.


Your portrayal of Squall, Seifer,and even Irvine is so one-sided that I can't continue with this story. I'll get to the point - you have made Squall into such a wimpy punk that I'm surpised the sleazy landlord hasn't bent him over the closest chair already . Not to have any backbone when it comes to standing behind his decision to not have sex in the hospital-I mean give me a break-if I had said no and someone still put their hands on me, you better damn believe that I'd have yelled the ceiling down.And the fact that neither Seifer nor Irvine care nor respect Squall's wishes just makes them mindless horny bullies. What makes them any different from Craig,except for the fact that they're pretty? I know Seifer is arrogant and has an ego the size of a small planet, but he's got more going for him than just a big dick. Squall's token resistance is laughable at least and highly annoying at most. I was hoping for a little more depth the longer this sequel got, but I'm tired of the same plot dressed up in mildy different wording-Seifer shows up uninvited, Squall says no to him, Seifer forces himself on Squall and he gives in. Boring after the hundredth time..

Hey, I was just re-reading this story and I thought you might want to know that your chapter formatting has been totally screwed it. It's actually really difficult to read now since it reads as one huge paragraph. Just thought you might want to know so that you could fix it.

take care, and I'm looking forward to an update for 'To Love a Cop'

Anon

I just finished the story, I went forever trying not to, and to read it as slow as possible because I absolutly did not want it to end.. I love it I love them all and I believe if I'm not mistaken a forth chapter has just been added *runs off to read* YOUR THE BEST! sQUUE LETS GET MARRIED AND WE CAN HAVE LITTLE SEIFER AND SQUALL FICLETS! .. I kid but I truely love this work it's amazing please keep my habbit supplied <3

LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE<3<3<3<3 I love this entire thing it's by far the best fic I eber read

just re-read this story again. LOVE IT! but my question to you is when will the sequel be posted? you mentioned at the very end that it would be sometime this year, and yet this year is almost over. :(

Please please post it soon! I'm running out of good stories to read!

Anon

Personally, I think this was a very nice "ending!" I really liked what Leon did in the end, your description and I loved the last phrase! Of course this is not really the ending, I can't wait to read the first chap of "To Love a Cop." I'm looking forward to it!

hoe?! am i too late to review this story? i hope no.. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! everything seems almost real to me.. anyway, you will make a sequel, right right? *kitten eyes* i'll wait for it. but if it's possible, don't make me wait too long ok? good luck!

Your lemons are really hot... but Seifer referring to himself as "daddy" and having Squall call him that is really... disturbing/nauseating to me. And in every single scene! Instant mood-killer. T_T I'm so sad that I have to miss out on all this, I just can't get past that. Am I the only one??

*deflates*

Er, what I mean is, "daddy" is really the very LAST person I want to be thinking about when I'm reading something like this, you know? ^^; Sorry if my first comment sounded too negative.