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for To Trust A Cop

by Shehanitan

schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this chapter, definitely well worth the wait! I love how Quistis can see through Squall and see his "glow," effectively, before Squall even knows himself.

I hope they can be happy! Please keep up the fantastic work :)
person Aralaiqualasse
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I lobve this fic very much, and blush evrytime i read it....Man, i first time read a fic where it has sex scene in all chapter......and did not feel odd since u make the story run smoothly...

i hope they will be together at last....I mean like lover....

by they way, can u pls gimme the lover trust summary? I just few hint here and there...what the hell happen to Squall to make him snap... Rape?


thanks...update soon TTAC...I really love it.....

PS: Will Laguna appear in TTAC?
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm up for a sequel! Absolutely 100%! :D
person DekorxAo
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of more plot, less lemon! Honestly, I think there is such a thing as too many sex scenes. While your lemons are probably the best sex scenes I've ever read, it gets a little tiring trying to read all the steaminess! LOL I find myself craving the plot more, so when I get plot I'm all excited! Especially since I love your plot writing just as much as your kinky sex writing! lol

I'm wondering if anything will come out of this new development with the crazy killer guy, and I can't wait to see! Anyway, keep on writing!
person sikare
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd be interested in a sequel :D
person Rangiku
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am sooo excited to read this chapter >,there are too much things left hanging in the last chapter and i'm so glad that Seifer is still Seifer.
i like the tension of the story, it keep things interesting =D

i'm all hands for a sequel, though it will have have less smut, as i think that you're really talented in
creating both good storyline and lemon. and i do agree with the ending of this latest chapter that
a little lemon is not suitable. a little lime should keep the fun going, hehe.

keep up the writing =)
i'll always be your loyal fan~~!!!!
P.S : i'm looking forward to an update for Office follies, i nid a tint of naive Seifer vs Persistent Squall
after all the excitement of this fic ^^
person Rangiku
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(I'm sorry i had to double post as my review was not fully uploaded due to a faulty line) ><
i am sooo excited to read this chapter >,there are too much things left hanging in the last chapter and i'm so glad that Seifer is still Seifer.
i like the tension of the story, it keep things interesting =D

i'm all hands for a sequel, though it will have have less smut, as i think that you're really talented in
creating both good storyline and lemon. and i do agree with the ending of this latest chapter that
a little lemon is not suitable. a little lime should keep the fun going, hehe.

keep up the writing =)
i'll always be your loyal fan~~!!!!
P.S : i'm looking forward to an update for Office follies, i nid a tint of naive Seifer vs Persistent Squall
after all the excitement of this fic ^^
person I.Hellsing
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yessss. A sequel. I need it in my life. Hahah.
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I think you should carry on with this one until at least the case is sorted, because it's still a part of the same storyline.

Once the case is over, maybe then a sequel for the feelings between the two?

But back to the chapter, I enjoyed it, and I would definitely like to see more. I think maybe a nice ending to this particular "part" of the story would be to have Squall captured and Seifer rescue him against all odds!

Then in the sequel, as I said previously, the feelings between the two can be explored more, and maybe the resistance Squall is harboring can come to an end and he can accept the fact that he possibly loves Seifer.

I'm babbling now, I liked this chapter and please continue!
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yea there better be a sequel! This is the never-ending saga that I will always look forward to! I have to give you credit though, when you aren't writing hot sex scenes, which you're the best at, you also have a unique writing style which i'm digging!
I like where the story is going, and of course, you can't end it without a hot sex scene filled with passion that Squall realizes he has for Seifer... and that might take a couple chapters, and some psychos intervening.
I was so glad you finally updated!! Keep it up pleaseeeeee