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Omg omg omg omg! The end!? No! I want a sequel! lol wow nice chapter! I laughed at the end with Seifer "never even though of it?" ha ha! and aww Squall was in danger!? Wow, you said that the sequel, if there is one, will have more plot, oh I wanna read! lol plz tell me will there be a sequel? will there? will there? XDD

I am so up for a sequel!!1 And a plot filled sequel at that! You spoil us!! :D

This chapter was... weird to say, but very cute. I just really liked the part at the beginning with Squall unsure of everything, and then the ending, it was wrapped up so nicely. :D

Hello! I just wanted to say thanks for writing, it seriously makes my day when I see that a new chapter is up! Sorry that this is my first review... but I've been reading since the beginning and this is the first story that I check when I come to AFF. I am very impressed with your writing style and the vividness of your creations. The story wraps its reader into it and it is impossible not to come back and find out what happens. You have adapted the characters so well. They fit within the original FF8 storyline and yet have their own uniqueness in the story, it makes them very real and easy to relate to.

I hope strongly hope that you are also writing your own creations outside of fan-fictions (don't misunderstand, I am addicted to them..but) I feel as though you would make an excellent author. You were able to take a storyline and make it completely your own; you created a schooling system, a town and a plot full of characters who come to life on the page and that are related to one another in some way. Your story flows so amazingly well it is hard to believe that you are updating this one chapter at a time without the ability to go back and change something in the story. You have talent, just look at how far you have gotten on this story as well as others, people love to read your stories. And, I myself would love to read more of them. I hope with my fingers crossed that you make this story into a sequel. Not only because I love this particular story, but because you are one of..come to think of it, you are my favorite author on this site. Your writing is above and beyond most of the other writers capabilities on this site.

I hope that this doesn't come across as some crazy, just a reader who hoped to praise someone for a job very well done, and with the hopes of another story. Hope that you aren't suffering too bad in the July heat!!

Your respectful reader,

Hubcap

love this chapter

Wow that was so hot! It's time already that Seifer admits his feelings. I'm so curious as to how much Squall will try to deny his. I also hope that we get to learn more about Squall's past soon!

I think it's quite nice that Seifer's coming to a realisation of his feelings and acting upon them with Squall. It seems they just made love rather than have sex. Although Squall is probably non too aware of this yet, I'm sure Seifer knows he did it this way, and on purpose too.

It's kinda sweet, but personally I don't think Squall will fall for it too easily or quickly. Seifer needs to show his loving and caring side more first before Squall will let his barriers down fully and embrace him completely.

I enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for the next one :)

*HAPPY SCREAM* OMG I feel like suuuch a fangirl right now. This chapter was just amazing!! Oh my god I am so surprised with Seifer, but what a wonderful development! I hope you keep on this path and ease it well into the story. I trust you will do a wonderful job.

Hi, it's me! I'm just lazy to log in. ;P

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Hands down, this is my favorite chapter in the entire story so far. IT WAS PERFECT. ABSOLUTELY, PERFECT, PERFECT, PERFECT!!!

*sigh*

I feel so happy for them. Please let that be their happy ending. ;)

AH!!! You took my advice about Seifer giving him head! Well, that or we had the same idea for the same chapter hehehe! I loved it. Made me so happy!!! The descriptions of the sex is different, but its a different type of sex, more emotional this time. I love it! Still hella hot! As far as what I think will happen next... well, they probably have mind-blowing sex and something verbal comes out of feelings, probably from Seifer, and Squall will either freak out or just be silent and Seifer will freak out at the lack of reciprocation and leave. Or you could have them announce their undying love for each other... but that's not your style or the style of the story that you've spent 41 chapter building up.
I'm so sad that story has to end, but happy at the same time that you're giving it 10 more chapters before wrap. ^.^
Please keep producing!
~~Baby Chiba~~

The hotness of this fic kills me