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for To Trust A Cop

by Shehanitan

person LadyPippy
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yah, I'm lazy to log in. But I agree with you--I've seen races go bad and people who weren't supposed to be involved got into trouble. I'm still liking where this is going, though. ;) Back on track! No more Teo! ;)
person memorietrail
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I must say that this was great and looking to see what happens next.
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No more Nida? Really?
::hopefully look::

And awww. Seifer's getting all feeling-ey and cute.
I hope Squall doesn't manage To stay any madder at Seifer than he usually is.
person lightning
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG can't wait for more! I can't wait to see what will Squall do he he! I love this story so much! Hope you update soon!
person IvyCirce
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Guh...I'm dead. This chapter just kill me.
So very hot!!!!
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That... was a really disturbing chapter. Emotionally more so than sexually, because at first I couldn't believe either that Seifer would go so far as to cause Squall actual *pain.*
Squall might be too stunned to be mad about it later on though, so in terms of their relationship this chapter seemed significant. Still, I think it deserves a full-blown non-con warning because the mood isn't quite the same as in the other chapters.

Great work again! Can't wait for more :)
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was HOT. *smooches her favorite author* Please, please, please don't ever let Squall near Teo again? I'm so happy with this chappie! ;P
person MEMORIETRAIL
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was so hot! You do write so great, I love it!
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
::pants::
.............God. I feel like I can't breathe. Hahaha.
That chapter was beyond hot.
I'm glad Squall didn't have the chance to get hurt in the race, but I wonder how he's going to take what Seifer's done? This chapter was great and I'm so excited for the next chapter!
person lightning
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG you're awesome! Int the beginnign I didn't want it to be Seifer, then I didn't know whether I wanted it to be Seifer or someone else and then I was glad it was Seifer! It was so hot! I'm curious to see what happens when Squall wakes up he he you rock!