rate_review Reviews

Haevn't reviewed in a while so I just caught up on quite a few chapters. Love the new character developments, especially Teo even though his personality really rubs me the wrong way. He's a creepy sort of guy, but he really compliments the story and Seifer and Squall's relationship. Squall socking him just about made my day!

Wails* waaaaaaaaah. Update! *POUTS like Selphie.*

Btw, Any other characters popping up by any chance? Seems a shame to not include Selphie, and I haven't seen Zelly since the beginning! Chicken wusses need love too! *cries*

Whoa, I've gone and ranted. Whoops. Well, I just wanna say this is my most favourite fic on adultfanfiction so I hope you will continue to write on it. I loved Office Follies too!

ooodles and noodles....Zannie. x

Oh it was so good and I'm very happy to see you have wrote more.

Mmmm. That sounds like loads of delicious catching up. Can't wait for all that, then.

I'm still so jealous over Teo [snarl]. Lol.
I'm practically dying waiting to see what's going to happen with Seifer and Squall regarding this race.

Wow, I liked this chap a lot! I'm happy Teo is back to the pic and I like that Squall's confused. I'd like to see Seifer more jealous though he he I love thsi story a whole lot, hope you update soon, well done once again!

Hey! I've been a loyal reader for a while (though I didn't get to review some chapters). I'm not bothered by the length of the story (I was actually quite happy that you keep on writing!). Right now though, I'm not very happy with Squall's character. In the beginning I really liked how you wrote him, but in this particular chapter I don't like him. I could handle the Nida thing and I know that I suggested Seifer should have some Laguna-like competition, but now that Teo's in the picture I'm not happy. :( I know, I'm a naughty reviewer, but...well, I guess I just wanted someone who would make Seifer straighten out his act. Not someone that Squall would actually respond to. I mean, he did pull away from Teo at the end, but I disliked the idea of him heading back to Teo in the first place, even with Quistis' suggestion. And what's with Seifer? First he actually shares Squall with Teo, then he doesn't want Squall around Teo, and now...I guess I thought that they'd have gotten past just being casual by now.

I'm sorry. I suck as a reviewer right now. Just ignore me...

I really love this story... but I kind of don´t like where it is heading... specially with ths Theo guy.... whatever........ I don´t know what to say... it kind of sucks. I t really looked like a last minute chapter.....so short!!!! I really love your longer chapters full of yummyness.

Hope to read you soon.

thank you so much for making this story! it has been so good to me (especially during my boring days in school ;P )

Awesome. And dont worry, the characters are believable enough without too much exposition. Who the hell needed more explaining?

Can't wait for the next one!


OOoodles and noodles....Zannie

Great work as awlays. I've really been enjoying Seifer's character development recently.