rate_review Reviews

wow i thought that was really good. it was powerful and filled with emotion. i really cannot wait for your sequel.

Don't get me wrong; I LOVE the story, but yeah...it needs a beta. It would be a lot of work (52 chapters!). Words like though, tough, thought, and through are totally mixed up making it often difficult to discern what a particular sentence means without having to make some damn good use of context clues, and that's just one example. I am treating this as a REAL review and not an "ZOMG! I luv ur ficcie!"-fest *shudders*. The story is GREAT even though you said it's smut with plot, and the lemons are SWEET (lol). It just needs some major editing.

WHAT. WHAT. WHAT. WHAT. WHAT.
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT ELSE HAPPENS.
NO FAIR. NO FREAKIN' FAIR, MAN.
HURRY UP AND WRITE THE NEXT STORY. I... GAH. I WANT MORREEEEE T_T.


on a slightly more lucid note, oh my god that was amazing.

I have been a silent viewer for a long time. All the way back to Cops Can't Be Trusted. So this time i wanted to say something to you, thank you. Thank you so much for taking your time to write and post this wonderful story. I have enjoyed it since the very beginning and I have even gotten some of my friends into it.
This story, despite all the warnings and such, has been able to keep me company [and sane] throughout the years. Please don't ever stop writing. I would be at such a loss, haha. I will try and wait patiently for the third installment! So until then, i read and re-read the rest of your wonderful stories, haha.

thank you again,

chamorrican56

Awesome, love it. Ending was emotional, and I was surprised that Seifer sent Squall alone. I'm excited to find out what happens! Please, post the new story soon! haha

Ohh, I knew Squall would do that the moment Seifer said someone would meet him in Esther. It's just something Squall would do. It's sad, but I feel you made the best decision in ending this wonderful story. It really was a delight to read this and I will be looking forward to the continuation of OF, and the sequel.

Thank you so much for writing this!

Start on the new squeal soon...I'm on my toes waiting for more!!

Love it. Very well done.
I'll keep an eye out for the sequel.
:)

Nice and unexpected ending to it... i was in tears by the time i finished reading the last chapter..
I'm curious to what Seifer will do next.. but i'm more interested with how Squall will go on after this..
After all, he really did lost everything.. and now being alone in Esthar will really take a toll on him..

I'm already looking forward to your next story "To love a Cop" and also the next chapter of "Office Follies".
I'm really really curious to how it will grow..

I really really love your story and will not fail to check for updates almost every weekend and when i'm bored, i'll even
re-read them.. can't help myself, it's really that good..
@>----- << Flowers & Kisses for encouragement.. ^^

*Applauds*

Thank YOU for writing this story for us to read! :D It's been a pleasure to follow it and I can't wait for the sequel! I can only hope that it arrives sooner than I imagine.

This chapter almost made me cry, poor Squall :( It's difficult to write such emotional distress but I think you managed to paint it out pretty well. I was a little puzzled when he told him that he had to leave the country though, I had not see that one coming at all! Oh, and once again I'm so thrilled that your'e going to make a sequel because otherwise it would be one of those annoying endings where you just end up wanting more yet knowing that you won't get any. D:

Good luck with your writing and keep up the hard work! I hope to see you again soon!