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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Come on Squall you can do it! That was a nice chapter and don’t worry Seifer you’ll get your lemon, I’m sure of it lols.
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When Squall calls Seifer ‘daddy’…That part kills me off (in a good way). But the killer is when Seifer calls him ‘my boy’ it’s so hot because it shows the domination and of course they’re not siblings which is a very good thing. I liked the chapter a lot. (Oh, I know it may seem strange to you that I review all the chapters but when I review a story, I'll review all of it, just to give the author my opinion about the whole thing, no exceptions, so I either review all the chapters or none, anyway you rock keep up the good work!).
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That rocked. Simply rocked. I’m really curious about the clothes and the bike too…I want to know lols I guess I have to be patient about it. I don’t know why you don’t ‘sound’ satisfied but I am lols.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I don’t like the landord…lols.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just one thing. You start becoming one of my favorite authors lols.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The whole challenge thing makes this story even more interesting and well done Squall way to go! Poor him though, he was so embarassed after he had fun. Then again I don’t think I have to feel sorry for him, he seemed to enjoy it a lot lols. Well, this story rocks thus far.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I felt so sorry for Seifer…poor him. This was something I wasn’t expecting, very good idea and really nice.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Squall…As for Seifer, that was something I really couldn’t see happening but now that I think about it, it was a very good idea. He would do this, only to prove to himself that he can forget about Squall (when he can’t) and have some fun just for one night, this is how he is, he’ll have his fun as long as the brunet doesn’t stay with him but his mind will always lead him back to Squall which benefits us all, lols.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok you rock at lemons, this is out of the question. I like the whole threesome idea for one night since it doesn’t make them realize their feelings for each other from one day to the other.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really think that this chapter was necessary. It shows that Seifer feels protective over the brunet and although he might feel like this for a friend too, he has a different way with Squall, a completely different communication since we all know what he thinks of his…’pet’ as he wants to call him. Also I liked that Squall wasn’t hopeless, he managed to defend himself quite well showing the lion in him.