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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once I read the warning I started laughing a lot and at the same time I was a little worried about what I was about to read in that chapter. But then again that was fun lols Seifer you naughty boy.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I missed Squall in this chapter lols but it was still a great one. I liked that you focused on Seifer, usually you focus on Squall, not that I mind or anything but the change is interesting and nice. The plot progresses nice and I wouldn’t say slowly since I find it really good that you don’t rush things. These two have a big ego and admitting to themselves how they feel or even trying to figure it out is not an easy thing for them.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so hot! Well as I’ve seen this story is 2 years old ha? Well, no matter, I’m a little late I guess but anyway. And I’m going to review each and every chapter of this story, so I’d better begin. It’s really interesting how these two met up again. I really loved the chapter and the fact that they’re in character. I also completely fell in love with some parts such as the way Seifer persuaded Squall to follow him and his irritation about the belts, lols, awesome!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This becomes so interesting. I pity Squall but oh well this fanfic rocks anyway, I really like the beginning of the plot.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting chapter. I like the descriptions of feelings and the way things progress. You don’t rush anything which is good.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a really long and wonderful chapter. I liked the hot parts of course but the way you keep them in character and describe them so well is really what makes me love this story so much. Also, the hints about Squall’s past are really interesting and make me feel quite ‘anxious’ (in a good way) for what’s coming next.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well for this chapter…it starts with an H, then continues with an O and ends with a T. Lols, you rock!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this one it was great!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The cuteness overwhelms me. /dies/ I have to keep myself from absolutely spazzing over those two. Great chapter and hopefully we'll see another one soon!
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! These two are sooo cute together!!! XD I love you!!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! These two are sooo cute together!!! XD I love you!!!