rate_review Reviews

Kya. 8D Their relationship is moving forward, ever-so-slowly. Once again, gorgeously done and the dynamics of their relationship is developing quite wonderfully.

Squall emotional breakdown was wonderfully done and I only fear that many will misinterpret it and feel that it was random and out of character. However, given Squall generally reserved personality with the added stress of ex-boyfriend Nida, not-quite boyfriend Seifer, upcoming tests, art, and then rent, the breakdown was long in coming and masterfully written.

Another wonderful chapter from you and I, again, eagerly await the next. -prepares self for the daily checkups for an update-

i really like the story and BOO on the long wait for an update. Don't be discouraged in writing. People like me tune in frequently to see if it has been updated. I like your take on squall as an artist. Keep the story coming.

here is a review: excellent story
now where is the next chapter?
the natives are restless

OMFG! This story has me hooked so badly! SeiferxSquall is such a hot and interesting couple. They definitely match each other with their totally clashing personalities. And the way you write it´s so.. graphic XD Not that I'm complaining! Another thing I love of your fic is that it actually has a plot and character development, unlike many other stories where the author places Squall and Seifer in a random environment just for the purpose of monkey sex.

I mean, your story has that feature (LOTS and LOTS of examples, which I truly I'm grateful for XD), but wrapped around a very deep and interesting characterization of both men. I love the fact that you don't make Squall go down on Seifer without a fight first. It's just the way their relationship is supposed to be! All about pride and strength.

Ok, now I'm rambling, so I better stop.

Loved each and every chapter so far! Please, keep writing, kay? I can't wait to see how Squall is going to do at the test! Hopefully he'll pass! And Seifer will give him a 'prize' XD

aH. This is what I needed. Had a really shit day but this has made it well worth it. Teo confrontation was handled well, not too much angsting and what not. Is Nida gonna screw up big time? Can't wait to see. great chapter.


Oodles and noodles...Zannie

So the Teo/Squall confrontation ended pretty well. Though I wonder if it'll be a just a one night stand (so much for me wanting sei/squ to become exclusive...you just write the smut so well!). Nida is gonna cause something to happen...I just can't imagine what. I check all the time for updates, so I'll be eagerly waiting for the next one.

that last scene between Seifer and Squall almost bordered on sweet. I am sooooooooo happy. I was so waiting to see Seifer jealous :-D

You have NO idea how much I needed to read an update to this fic (I know I say that everytime, but its true!).
Thank you so much for the time and effort you dedicate to writing this story :)
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That was great I really enjoyed it. Now what is going to happen?

Alas! No smut, but still as great as always. I was practically bouncing at the Squall-Seifer-Nida meeting as well as Squall-Teo meeting. -swoons- I guess my daily checking for an update was paid off. xD -just got home and had to check-

-swoons- You own me for life. Completely~ can't wait for the next chapter; reading this totally made my night.