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for To Trust A Cop

by Shehanitan

person Anon
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is going just perfectly!!! I can´t wait for the next chapters to see how things proceed. I am glad that you are submitting this fic regularly once in amonth. But there is one thing I´d like to see more...
Even though I like Theo I would like even more if there´d be more of Zell, Irvine and Raijin! That is just plain cruel of you for adding them only in few chapters and Zell didn´t even haven´t had one go on Squall!!!
Please give those three a change!!! They are too hot for not deserving it!
person missthinker
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update, yay!!!!
Good job on the Teo-confrontation part, don't worry.
And I'm seriously tempted to kick Nida off!!!! svghjsmdnvbuejfndhjnvh!!! Squall, be a good boy and do what Seifer said, just kick him off >____<
smut next chapter?? *winks*
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I just discovered your writing... yesterday? I've been slowly working my way through your stories and I have to say that this one is my absolute favorite.
The sex is well done, and the plot is interesting. I have no idea where things are going or how it will end, which is rare, so I'm really looking forward to more.
Please keep up the good work. <33
person missthinker
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what will Seifer do when he know Nida's living with Squall..??? Poor Squally-poo
Can't wait for the next chapter [of more hot scenes] !!!! *cough*
person memorietrail
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so very good!!
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wuuu...Shehani-chan, why isn't Squall cuddled up to Nida yet? (T-T) Haha, I know it wouldn't be normal if he just picked up where they left off five years earlier--it's just that I can't *wait* to see Seifer's face when he finds that he has serious competition. Nida *will* be serious competition for Seifer...right? (0_o) I mean, his entrance was pretty useless if he doesn't shake things up good. I want Seifer to suffer, bwahahaha...(^^,)

You updated sooner than I expected--which is wonderful. Keep it up! (^^,) I need my weekly dose of your writing, otherwise I get cranky.

Remember: Make. Seifer. SUFFER.

Love you, darling! (~.^) MWAH!
person Teri
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... I just love you. Thank you so freakin' much for updating! You have no idea how much I look forward to your updates!
Hehe, I can't wait for Nadia and Seifer to come into contact with one another XD That is if Squall doesn't kill Nadia first *snickers*
person Sekre
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Squall - Nida is gonna drive him nuts.
person Sweet
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah. I love you, you rock, so much. -has been checking this story daily for updates- ;.; Totally one of my favorite Seifer/Squall stories, ever. Again, the characterizations were lovely, and Seifer and Squall's relationship has made a definate change since the beginning of the story. -diessqees- While there was no smut in this chapter, it still was full of so much love~

Can't wait to read the next~