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for To Trust A Cop

by Shehanitan

person yay
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome I was surprised to see this update, oh and by the way >_> when you type 'fife' its actually spelled 'five'. XD
person memorietrail
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I can't belive you stoped there. It was so very good and I want more.
person IvyCirce
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa, I just found this story. I already read Can't Trust A Cop and I love it. I'm so happy you decide to make a sequel. And the threesome part is even though I don't like threesome idea. You're wonderful. Keep working.
person Pockie
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yum. Talk about hawt smex here. Continue soon?
person Salamandor
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh yay a new chapter! I was so happy to see this... lol

I think you handled the morning after really well. How typical that's what Seifer wants. I don't see how Squall handles it. XD

Ohh this new development with Nida is interesting! I wonder how Nida will behave... and how Seifer will react to it. I hope you update soon! I love your story.
person missthinker
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, seifer keep teasing squall that he's like a girl.
Update sooner please~?? you know everybody's waiting for more smutty chapters here!!! 8D
*offers sweets and cookies*
person Sweet
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, yum. Just has delicious as before. I had almost given up on this update, and have been rereading it for the last few months. xD And it's not just for the pr0n, as wonderful as that is. The characters are developing wonderfully, both individually and within their interactions together. I can definately see the beginnings of Seifer and Squall as a couple, and not just some majorly hot fuck-budding.

Keep up the good work~
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, Nida definitely isn't a Laguna type, but I guess he'll do. (~.^) Great job! (^^,) I was hoping Squall would be P-I-S-S-E-D, not just disturbed by the somewhat forced threesome, but it's a start, I suppose. I think it's time Seifer learned a big, hard lesson. (~.^)

Update soon, honey. (~.^)
person florinoir
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Seifer you had it!!Squall with a gunblade will sooo kick your ass!!!^^
It's always a pleasure to see the next chapter, and I'm very impatient to see the continuation!!Who's Nida for Squall? What's the past of our favorite brunet!^^ And how Seifer will react!!^^ Can't wait(but will noneless^^)!!!
/Squall/And don't make me blush with Téo.I don't blush.Understand?
Mwahahahahahhahahaha!!!
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!! GAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *tackles and covers you with kisses*
I was soooooo worried that you had given up this fic! Omg... I SOOOO needed to read this! Oh man...
YIPIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

And the Teo point... man... I'm glad Squall voice his opinion and Seifer sorta/kinda got the point XD