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Wooot! Update! Been so long figured it was abandoned. But yeah Nida is a well needed plot twist, he's there to provide the friction (aside from the friction Seifer naturally provides.) I kinda see Nida as a brother type figure, is that how you're planning to portray him? Can't wait to see how Seifer takes it. Update soonish?

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Zannie

Hrmmm, first off I think you write very well and your stories are a Godsend as far as smutty-satisfaction. (~.^) Still, I think after 27 chapters Seifer himself needs a few lessons as to how to treat people right. Why doesn't Squall find himself a nice Laguna-type figure, ne? It'll give Seifer enough competition to amp up his game. (~.^) Kisses and cookies until next time, darling. (~.^)

i'm suggesting this to my friend who loves bdsm though technically no matter how much squall likes it he has technically never consented and he doesn't look forward to or like being degraded and handcuffed he seems to just end up in that position and then seifer distracts him from it so much he doesn't care

excellent story btw please continue
although you continuely keep me worried that someone else besides seifer will take adavntage of squall as said seifer distracts and makes him like the bdsm he's kinda the perfect dominate in keeping squall happy but as squall has thought rather than stated he's more than okay with seifer taking advantage but gets very and cruelly bent out of shape when someone else tries

i've rambled sorry but you are bookmarked and i hope to see this continue
i'm glad i found the sequel to never trust a cop because i read it 3 times before finding this thanks again

@ Chapter 9

So glad I decided to read the sequel, but still, Seifer's a bit much, isn't he? Not that I'm surprised, but I hope Squall gives him H-E-L-L.

this is one hell of a story LMAO
amazingly done
O.o some spelling errors but whatever that doesn't matter xD
it's still amazing

Oh holy shit. Your story is to die for. And this chapter was so wonderful. I've been waiting for the double entry scene since Seifer mentioned it. *blushes* It's nice to see that your are fixing up some of the grammar errors, like the chocked/shocked/choked thing but it wasn't really that bad to begin with so it's ok. :D

PLEASE keep writing, it is so nice to see this kind of stuff for SxS, when most of it is just the weepy fluff. xP You handle it so well, with good characterization, a nice plot and just damn good sex. *glee*

I have to admit that I've been enjoying this story until this last chapter.

I don't think Squall will ever be able to look at Teo again. I really and truly don't think he'll be able to respect him as a teacher or even allow Teo to be his teacher anymore. AS for Seifer, I'm getting tired of him treating Squall like some cheap whore. I understand him being an Alpha Male but bringing Squall's teacher in on their sex life is going TOO damn far. It's Rape!!!
It's one thing for him to be with Squall, it's a totally other thing for him to whore Squall out to other people, even if Squall got physical pleasure from it in the end. I think if Squall respects himself, even a little, he'll definitly stop Teo from being his teacher and definitely lay down the ABSOLUTE LAW to Seifer.

Oh my god, I love you. Truly. You have my heart, brain and soul. I LOVES YOU!
Oh man, poor squally-boy. Not only did he have Seifer, but he also had Teo... now THAT is gonna be one fun school lession *snerks*
So here's the question: Afterwards, is Squall gonna just... disapper for a few days (much to the fury of Seifer's cock) or is he gonna lay down the law to seifer?
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!! XD!!!

gah! your stories always make me flushed! good job! can't wait for more!

I actually feel sorry for Squall. Seifer is pushing it too far. I'd never be able to look Teo in the eyes again if I were Squall. SEifer's gonna make it were Squall goes to Quitis for protection cause all Seifer does is treat him like nothing instead of like a person.