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for To Trust A Cop

by Shehanitan

person Tryst
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You took of the sign in to review thing. I think you've had it off for a while, though. Damn. I guess it's my fault then. I've been a bit busy. Anyway, I've been waiting for Seif to find out and talk to Quistis. And I didn't really think there was an ulterior motive on her part. I just thought she was helping him out. LOL! Naive? Yes, very.
person Mel
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, Seifer is over-protective! That's cute! ;) This story is very good and I do hope you will update soon! There were some mistakes with the verb tenses, but nothing too obvious that it took away the enjoyment of reading your story. Continue the good work!!
person Daychan
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An update!! Yay! I've been checking every day for the last couple of weeks.^^

So super seme makes his move, huh? Man, he's going to get the cold shoulder if Squall ever finds out. Unless he manages to tame his little Squally in the meantime, of course. Fight on, Seifer, we're with you all the way! XD

And thank you for your hard work, Shehanitan!^^
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AN UPDATE!!! WHOO HOOO!!!! *dances the happy dance of a happy reader being able to read a new chapter after a long, looooong day*
Oh man, I love how Dommy Seifer is being XD Makes me quiver in my seat, awaiting the next chapter! :D
Hmmm, I wonder who Quistis has planned to try and take Squall away from Seifer, but I'm sure anybody who reads this knows that Seifer won't give in without a fight! XDDD!!!
Oh man, I think I love this series even more!
person Sekre
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Good to see a new chapter :D Tis always worth the wait. Poor Squally, he doesn't even realize all the things that go on behind his back.
person memorietrail
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write more
person sprinkles
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fantastic.
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*drools* I think I have a whole new side of Seifer to love now...
DAMNIT! But you write really fucking excellent man porn XD You have an amazing talent my dear, and the plot... hehe... the plot is good.
Btw, 2 questions...
Will Squall end up in hospital because of Craig and Seifer will come along and beat the shit out of Craig?
Will there be spanking? (because spanking is very, VERY goodXD)
On a side note: I do know people like your Squall who left school at an early age (not because of the same thing that happened to Squall) and it is a hard road for them...
person YACUMO
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I went to heaven and came back!!!
It is just not only the cutest chapter ever, but the sexiest also!!
I love how you made this time our lovely Squall the needy and pusher one!!

I LOVE IT!!!
person Sekre
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute!! Helped make today an even happier birthday =D