rate_review Reviews

I love this story. It is so riveting I couldn't stop reading it even the bad parts that made me want to flinch and scroll past them I read. I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment and I believe it will be just as good if not better then this and it's prequel. I will like to see how Squall deals with his nightmares and memories of what happened at Seraph's. I hope for a happy ended, but doesn't every one? But I think your readers will be content if not pleased with any ending you write. Clear thinking and smooth writing flow to you.

i can't believe squall would be so daring! i hope seifer turns up soon. i wonder what squall's going to do, all alone in a unknown city.

Reviewer's Whining: Why haven't you updated yet?! It's so hard to find a really good story, and then they don't update at all! Please update soon! *pouts*

Love the fic. Very well put together, excellent plot line, and hot, kinky sex. ;-)

I've stopped reading this story a few chapters back, starting from when Squall was kidnapped. After that point I simply skimmed the beginning and the end. Perhaps I could finally start completely reading it again the next chapter. Hahaha...

You should TOTALLY ignore people like Ravenesque. It's probably just a sad little guy who has not the mind of a grown up. If you don't like it, DON'T READ IT! I, on the other hand, LOOOVE THIS STORY! I'm always eager to get more from you, be it this one or any number of your other great and yummy stories. Love it! Please continue writing and screw all the small-minded people in the world!!!

That review is stupid. It's like watching a scary rated R movie and later complaining that it was graphic and disturbing.
People like that make me crazy. It's like they look for things to get uptight about.

Please don't let something like that bother you.

-That said-
I'm curled up in bed half dead/dying... and your update couldn't have come at a better time.
I'm so glad Squally is back where he belongs... I'm sure it'll be a long process back to "okay" if it happens at all... and I look forward to every chapter of it.

Oh my God, he's finally free! But he's not ok at all, Squall that is! That's normal,I was expecting that he'd be like this. I also expect for Squall and Seraph to meet again. I'm really curious to seehow Squall will start recovering. It'll take time! This chapter was really nice, the description of feelings, everything! You did a very good work, I liked the interaction between Seifer and Seraph a lot! Please keep it up and update soon! I can't wait!

Long time no see!! It is nice that you have updated. In the past I told you I found it quite shocking and disturbing that a person could write such violent scenes (raping), but anyway, I tried really really hard just to ignore them and see what was going to happen in the story, and finally that damn torment has ended. My gosh, lol, almost didn´t finish huh?
I am glad that finally Squall was saved by Seifer, and I also fancy the idea that Seifer admited he loved Squall.....now we need Squall to admit it too. Frigging kill Seifer´s brother, and that puny son of his. I really detest those characters. In this case I really don´t care how gore you want to be.... just dissapear them LOL.

Hope to read from you soon, and also hope to see how are you going to mend the relationship; sexual and sentimental, in between your characters.

I also hope you update your other sotries too. Chiao

Ignore Ravenesque, and ur rite y would someone read a story they don't like, i hate people like that! Anyhow, Serano really had a strong reaction against his mom comment, maybe he's not as bad as he seems, though its weird if he and squall are about the same age and seifer is only a few years older this would mean seraph is old enough to be squall's and seifer's dad?? Point aside, i like the beginning you really show how manipulative and smart Seraph is....evil genius are so frightening... too bad seifer isn't like that and good thing serano isn't like that..