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Well, it was a little shorter than the other chapters, but still good. ^_^ I'm glad to see Squall finally stood up for himself. I mean, yes, it's hot as hell when they go at it, but y'know... Squall can only take so much, right? And I know that you said there won't be much more from Seifer's POV, but this chapter was a good one, because you can finally see that Squall is getting under his skin... Great job, as usual. ^_^ Can't wait for your next update!

You didn't ruin anything about his character. Actually, I was pretty surprised at how well you portrayed him. Just reading about Seif getting an ego boost from sex with Squall was just so fucking hot. It left me wanting more.

You are not ruining his character at all!! You in fact my dear writter are making him more human..........and a lot sexier iof what he was!!!!

I also love the way in which ypu turned the roles and made Squall extremely angry towards Seifer. I really loved that part.

Hope to read you soon.

Haha, so squally is being a brat now, hm??? He won't be able to resist The Seifer-ness, which is probably why he's avoiding him xDDD I could see why Squall would be pissed though - I'm sure he's humiliated from getting turned on by his 'raper' and getting fucked out on a public dirty wall no less ... and for Seifer getting so involved in his life. I would love to see what our bastard-of-an-almasy do next.

Great sex scene....but you have a little problem with the tenses.....you were......no you was.

Oh by the way, although I love how you are making Seifer a fucking asshole I beleive that he went too far this time.
One thing is to play a rape scene, and another one is to actually do it and have the fucking balls to say to your lover...sex parter....whatever that he is a bicth and take it as one.
Como on....a little cold shoulder from Squall and a 1% tenderness from your fucking rapist of a representation of Seifer wont harm no one.

As always a pleasure and hope to read you soon.

Wooooow, I just *knew* it was Seifer though. :3 Haha, this chapter is super steamy, I loved it [how sick am I?!]. Please continue, and I know that they're gonna be together in the end, because they're going to end up in a relationship right?? :D

Well I don´t know if what those two shred can be called friendship, but it can´t really end up here!?! That would be just wrong!!! Since Seifer is the only one who can make Squall really *loose it* if you know what I mean...
And think about Zell, Irvine and Raijin!!! How they are going to have a ride if this is going to end here!?!

I actually found ch. 9 to be pretty dang hot.
I'm glad it was Seifer though, I would have been upset if it was anyone else. I hope Seifer realises that Squall has had some issues in the past with being raped though.

Please hurry with more and Seifer should feel a little bad at least. He could find a way to make up for being such an asshole.

Nice Chapter. *sagenod* Seify went toooooo far this time. Squall's kinda like me. A bit of pain is good and all, but rape will NOT fly.