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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seifer? Gone too far? As if. Squall still loves him. Well, he loves his cock I guess. I KNEW it was going to be Seifer. I just knew it. When you said borderline non-con in the warnings I was like "Yay! Fake Seifer rape!". But W00t @ the hotness of this chapter! Update soon please!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done Squall! It was really mean of Seifer!! But I hope it"'s not the end....Right..?
Good continuation!^^
Good continuation!^^
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Not many stories can get this kind of reaction out of me. I'm a little unsure about the direction of this story, but mabe it will be a little more clearer with a few more chapters. I like how the characters are dipicted, even though Seifer's a real jerk to me in this story. Hope you update soon I eagerly await the next chapter.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are very good at writing smut. Your ear for dialogue is awkward, but readable. For the chapter not having been beta read and for English not being your first language, it was good.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SO fantastic!!! I'm loving this story so much. Seifer is such a bastard :P Can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Peh. It would be seifer, huh? Though I think he's jerk for that, I did find it reallly hot xD I dunno, I think he could've done worse by going all the way before revealing himself - his morals might be...questionable, but I don't think he would go as far as to actually rape somebody. I think Squall could get over it, Seifer's a great 'package' after all.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope for more.. soon.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work! You’ve got a perfect balance of plot and... fun stuff. Keep it up!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-faints- The smut is amaaaaziiing! I'm so sad I never saw this story before (I usually only look in the yaoi section). Great stuff..., your seifer is really hot, love his language. :) Great job!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, nice. :3 A plot is starting to form and I'm so happy that the beginning is starting. Hehe, let's hope it gets more steamy! ;D