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for To Trust A Cop

by Shehanitan

person Jupitor Knight
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow still made it hot even without the sex. Enjoying reading this soooo much can't wait for the next update
person Tryst
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww. I wanted some more smutt. That's fine, though. I can wait. I hope.
person Sammei
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, totally wasn't expecting the lack of smut in that. ~_^ Heh, just kidding. I like plot, too; I'm not a complete perv. It was really nice to see Squall in a fight like that because he always seems so helpless around Seifer (then again, who can blame him? >_>). The new characters are interesting, and I'm wondering if they're going to show up later.. and what was Seifer doing there in the first place? Great job, as usual, and can't wait til the next update!
person florinoir
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!That was Squally!!^^
/Squall/Not quite...I use to beat the shit of these bastards...>_<
At least, you're not only a sex-toy, now...
/Squall/Fuck off...
Good continuation!^^I loved this chapter!!^^
person s and s blah
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one hot story thanks so much and please keep it coming
person LT
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow . . . Where's the ice water? I need a drink.

Beautiful description and humorous dialogue, too. I now have another story to add to my short list labelled "read over when I'm feeling down." Even if Squall is a bit OOC . . .
person Tryst
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG! THAT WAS SO HOT! I can't BELIEVE how hot that was. Please, please MORE! I DEMAND MORE! I loved when Seif said I didn't know you were sucha SUCKER for rimming and Irvine thrust his cock deeper into Squall's mouth. I giggled! Update soon!
person Momochi
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wowww, that was a fast update! :3 And I loved this chapter, it was awesome. Haha, please continue with this and update! It was so yummy. X3
person Jupitor Knight
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep it coming and keep it hottttt

Your doing great can't wait to see how far this goes
person Sammei
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was hot, as usual. ~_^ Oh, Squall.. when will you ever learn? Heh. I'm interested to see if Seifer finds that drawing Squall was doing, and how he reacts. And how they eventually develop a relationship out of this crazy "screwing each other's brains out" thing they have now. XD Anyhow. Great, great job and I can't wait til your next update!