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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, although there isn't any SeiferxSquall in this, it's a nice chapter although I don't read het. :X But I'm super excited towards the next chapter!!! I can't wait~
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This man is a walking erection!!!
/Seifer/yeah...
That was not a compliment!!
/Seifer/So, what was that?
...
/Seifer/That's what I thought...
So, who's the third?^^(want Squally!!)
/Squall/Arg, no...I want to keep my job and so, I must walk!!
Good continuation!^^
/Seifer/yeah...
That was not a compliment!!
/Seifer/So, what was that?
...
/Seifer/That's what I thought...
So, who's the third?^^(want Squally!!)
/Squall/Arg, no...I want to keep my job and so, I must walk!!
Good continuation!^^
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking God. I just read the other story the beginning or whatever and now this fucking AMAZING sequel. God, I love you. This is so fucking hot. Especially that part in the first one where Zell has him sit on his lap. Oh God. So yummy. And when Seif fucks him with the baton. You're a God.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that's where you ended it!? Well, I do have to admit, that wasn't the way I was expecting the het-ness to come in. Heh. But very in character. What a Seifer thing to do for a mission. >_> Also, poor Squall! First those thugs at work, and now something else is about to happen to him.. I wonder how Seifer is going to blindside Squall this time? Can't wait for your next update!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sighs
Such a long wait for such a short chapter.
I sincerely skipped the hetero sex scene, but I reall want to see whta you have in store for Squall.
Such a long wait for such a short chapter.
I sincerely skipped the hetero sex scene, but I reall want to see whta you have in store for Squall.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay :D Updated ^^
I love this story.. although the first part was sorta.. like lifted straight out of an AV.
Anyways keep it up, I really want to see more rawr!
One thing is that there are a few obvious spelling/grammar errors and paradox's in the third chapter, but nothing spell-check can't fix.
GL ^^
I love this story.. although the first part was sorta.. like lifted straight out of an AV.
Anyways keep it up, I really want to see more rawr!
One thing is that there are a few obvious spelling/grammar errors and paradox's in the third chapter, but nothing spell-check can't fix.
GL ^^
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't read it right away, but I'm so glad to see you're doing a sequel. I loved the first one and with plot on top of the smut, I'm definitely looking forward to it.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o Jessie like. Jessie hot.
...More please!
...More please!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hum, don't know if it was a good idea to fall asleep...
/Seifer/Mwahahahahahhahahahhaha!!
/Squall/Oh fuck...
/Seifer/Damn right!!Nyarknyarknyark!!
Good continuation!^^
... A beer bottle..?
/Squall/Oh fuck off...T__T
/Seifer/Mwahahahahahhahahahhaha!!
/Squall/Oh fuck...
/Seifer/Damn right!!Nyarknyarknyark!!
Good continuation!^^
... A beer bottle..?
/Squall/Oh fuck off...T__T
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow again your doing great keep it up. The story has lots of potential.