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I forgot to add! Seifer admits he looooovvves Squall!! I hate to sound like a fangirl but still! he said it! I wonder if he realizes he said it, probably not!

Why haven't you updated in so long?!

ARGH! Sitting here and waiting for you to updaaate .___. it's so exciting right now I can't get your story out of my mind! I want to know what will happen and the little clue you gave about the ending is making me even more curious!

You said that everyone probably will "hate your guts" about the ending but, if I may say so myself, the fact that you have those guts is one of the reasons why I love your stories so much. You keep crossing a line that many doesn't dare to cross which takes your stories events to a whole new level and I enjoy that alot :D

Keep up the awesome work and don't give up!

I didn't think that Seraph would meet Seifer in this chapter or that he would mentally torture squall. I thought this chapter was all physical punishment! but hey I like this either way! I bet there is so trick to this getting Squall back. Seraph seems to be starting to like Squall alot more (not in a good way) if seraph is as bad as i think he is, its going to be harder for Squall and seifer to reunited...i hope i see the result of serano's stupidity and lust....i wonder what's he going to do to Squall???

GAH! I really hope that Squall gets rescued in the next chapter, Seraph is sadistic and.. bah, I really hope you update soon! lol :P I love this story XD

Ok, that was a good chapter, even though I didn't like the blood scene at all and well I preferred it having been much less and Seraph being with Squall a lot more. I liked the interaction between Seraph and Seifer. I'm not expecting Seraph to go down easily at all, and maybe Squall have been so scared after that he'll choose Seraph over Seifer for the evening? Or he'll be totally broken. I'm thinking that Seraph will want to keep Squall or meet him again. Hope so but I do want the bastard to go down. But on time. Overall, good work but I wanted more spotlight on Squall :-p I really want to see what happens next, please update soon.

The more intense you make get torture scene and the more you describe how Squall is being scared by it, the more I presume he's going to be traumatized once he gets out. And I don't expect him to fall lovingly into Seifer's arms anymore. I expect that he'd run as far away from the Almasy family as he could, because as long as Seraph is alive and he's affiliated with Seifer, there's always the possibility, or at least the fear that he'd end up prisoner to Seraph again. And I know Squall is smart enough to make that connection. I want Seifer to be punished. He shouldn't get off easy for being a dumbass in the first place and allowing Squall to get captured by his psychopath brother. But I'm sure that's where you were headed with this anyway... ^.^ Look forward to more soon!

Yikes...now Squall has the horrific death of the maid as another burden on his mind. D: Great job on that scene though! *shudders*

livejournal? there aren't a lot of popular places that you could post your stories, because it's NC-17. I hope you find one though!

O M G!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked this chapter so much! I want to see what will happen with Seifer and of course (duh!) Squall! I liked the character (as of yet) of the really old guy. The experience in him and the way you can't seem to catch him off guard. I think he'll like Squall because he's a person that doesn't give in easily and very stubborn. I can't wait to see what will happen with Seraph and Squall. Of course I'd like Seraph to start becoming obsessed with Squall but well I'll wait and see. I hope Teo appears soon again, I like him! I want to read more so much I'm tempted to ask of he next chapter as a Christmas present (didn't I ask that in a way now? lol) but Christmas is in four days and I know we shouldn't press you and stuff. But I have to admit I'm kinda scared about what will follow as Squall's punishment, I hope Seraph forgives him soon? Please update as soon as you can, excellent chapter.