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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..wow. Your mind works in dirty ways, doesn't it? ;) Just kidding. I'm not sure how much I liked the whole bottle bit of it, but it was well written. And the res of the chapter was great. I'm surprised Seifer actually let him fall asleep like that. Wonder what it's going to be like in the next chapter. I, for one, would like to see what it means to be the toy of an Almasy (at Squall's expense, of course lol). Great job. Can't wait for the next update!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So I've been reading your stories, my favorite couple is Seifer/Squall and your doing an amazing job of writing them. I love your scenes, both the sexual ones and the talking ones, cause they're well done, the story really sucks you in. Add more chapters! Immediatly!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I really like where this is going, but there is one...few things what would make it even juicier...
Irvine, Zell and Raijin.
Plllleeeeeaaassse you just got to add them, I still feel bad for Raijin that he didn´t had a go with Squall in that prequel and I am sure that Zell and Irvine are going to be wery hurt, if they are now denied. You know once you start you can´t stop.
So beg you to give these tree a change to prove themselves.
Irvine, Zell and Raijin.
Plllleeeeeaaassse you just got to add them, I still feel bad for Raijin that he didn´t had a go with Squall in that prequel and I am sure that Zell and Irvine are going to be wery hurt, if they are now denied. You know once you start you can´t stop.
So beg you to give these tree a change to prove themselves.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter! I’m glad you’re giving the characters a little more depth. And poor, poor Squall. Just don’t do anything too mean to him, okay?
Great job!
Great job!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohohohoho.... Squally, you're in a deeeeep shit!^^Pleasuable, but deeeeeeeep!!!
I'll certainly don't mind read the continuation!!
/Squall/Such a perv...
Good continuation!^^
I'll certainly don't mind read the continuation!!
/Squall/Such a perv...
Good continuation!^^
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:raises hand: I want to see what Seifer has in store for Squall. Will that boy ever learn? ^_^; Great chapter! You always write really great scenes like this, and I can't see what you have in store for all of us next time. Can't wait for your next update!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Squall, he just never catches on. Maybe someday Seifer should sit down and explain everything to him -- since I don't think he'll catch on to anything less subtle. xD
I'm hoping for fluff somewhere along the lines. x3 These boys are hot as hell together, but they're so cyoot too. xB -waves SxS flag- But either way, great story. ♥
I'm hoping for fluff somewhere along the lines. x3 These boys are hot as hell together, but they're so cyoot too. xB -waves SxS flag- But either way, great story. ♥
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:3 I just have to say, I read tons of fics here and you are one heck of a talented writer!! I love your writing, and I can read your stories over and over and over. I've been a yaoi fan and I've read fanfics for about five years now and your's is by far one of the BEST I have read!! Please do keep it up and keep up the awesome work!! :D I can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah an update!!
Well I am starting to really like your story...although I am more romantic...but well...
Well I hope to read some steamy non-stop-sex-scene between those two soon!!
Well I am starting to really like your story...although I am more romantic...but well...
Well I hope to read some steamy non-stop-sex-scene between those two soon!!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it at least gave a little depth to the characters, Seifer especially. You can start to see him crack, and maybe care for Squall just a bit. At least, that's what I think. Anyhow! All of your chapters don't have to have lemon stuff (though, for the record, you write some of the best lemons I've ever read ;), so this is great. I want to see if/how Seifer finds out where Squall is working, and pays him a visit. X3 Ah, poor Squall.. I only hope he can manage to keep his job for once..