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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, please write more, this was so hot! I want to see more kinky sex with them!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*TACKLE GLOMP O'LOVE* XD XD XD!!! You made the sequel!!! I love you so much!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
RAWR!!!! UPDATE. need smut+plot. *splode*
anyways, you need to get a beta-reader or something, cause the first few paragraphs were riddled with grammar/spelling errors O:
but it's okaym it got better as it went on, but didnt completely go away.
<3.
anyways, you need to get a beta-reader or something, cause the first few paragraphs were riddled with grammar/spelling errors O:
but it's okaym it got better as it went on, but didnt completely go away.
<3.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I saw this and read the first one, and now I'm reviewing to say that you must continue this. xO Your lemons are yummy and these two boys deserve more. ... And I swear to god I'm going to start developing a cop fetish now because of you. xD
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squeee! I love this story. I'm willing to review if it gets another chapter up. ;D
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so porno... I don't mean it in the bad way, of course, cause well... I loved it!^^
/Squall/ Perverted... All of you!!
Ooooh yeah!!^^
Good luck with the continuation!^^
/Squall/ Perverted... All of you!!
Ooooh yeah!!^^
Good luck with the continuation!^^
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New story! =) I love your stories. I definitely want to know more about their relationship so please write more? ^^
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still just as hot as the first one. I look forward to whatever else you have planned, be it plot or smut or both.