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I made a small squeel when I saw that you updated! :D

Loved it!! Even though I feel bad for poor squall... :( Glad to see Seifer's back. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I think you still have a lot of readers following and if they stop because of something like this then they're losing out on a great story big time! TTAC is one of my favorite stories on AFF.

Anyway, I was actually quite relieved to see that Squall hasn't given away all of his pride yet, I was so happy when he threw his wine at Seraph xD even though it did get him into trouble... very hot trouble...

Keep up the amazing work! I'm eager for the next chapter! :)

Finally we get a glimpse of Seifer! Woo-Hoo! *pumps fists in the air* And it's interesting to learn about the whole crime seats and the Almasy family's part in the whole thing. Though this also begs the question; does Seraph want Seifer to join and follow along like a good little brother or does he want him to die? I guess it could go either way, though I'm still unsure of where Squall's treatment falls into this. Of course we all know it's to get to Seifer, but Squall was originally picked up in order to tell them where Seifer was right? Not really too sure about this but whatever.

I loved Teo and Seifer's confrontation; when I first realized that Teo was in the appartment, I was like 'Oh no! Seifer's gonna get the wrong idea and is Teo gonna tell him or be a dick and keep it to himself', but I should have known that Teo would have had Squall's best interests at heart and despite their falling out the both of them care enough about the youth to put their differences behind them and come up with a way of saving him. Though honestly I have no clue how they're gonna pull that off (it's a good thing; usually I'm the first one to realize that kind of stuff).

Hehehe, speaking of Squall, he certainly is as defiant as ever. Damn impulsive behaviour, but I've been there. Just this week I wanted to rip off the face of one of my co-workers for being such a bitch, but then again I haven't exactly been having the best week out there (and this little update picked my mood right up off the floor). Then again, I'm fairly sure that I would have waited for Seraph to turn away before tossing the drink somewhere, but that's just me and I'm a coward. Then I would have (attempted to) cut off his balls with one of the utensils. Or at least I would like to think I would have (attempted to) done so.

Anyways, keep up the good work, and I look forward to more!
Anon

A sequel?? Oh my god that is really nice.... Not.
LOL just kidding, I love most of your stories. :)

Anyway, I am not going to review this chapter, I am really disappointed but nevertheless waiting for you to update and see what is goin to happen to Seifer.

Bye

Poor Squall. *sniffles* Now would be a good time for the knight in shining armor to ride in and save the day lol.

if u lost half ur readers then they don't no what a good story is...i'm glad seifer's back but i wish it was longer....

It's so nice to see an author who can actually write something like this on this site.
I feel like all I normally see is "3 paragraphs of torture... happy save the day back together making up sex time".
Can't. Wait.///Moar. Pl0x. <3 (lulz)

don't listen to the people critisms or reviews about how they wish your story is different or how you shouldn't put the rape scene, it's your story, your world (mostly), i enjoyed every single chapter of ur story..I hope u don't get put down by this, i know a great writer but she couldn't take so many compliants and just stopped....i hope you continue it to the very end with ur own ideas.

P.S. i hope seifer has a good reason to be M.I.A. if not can you please make Squall punch him???or else i'll do it...along with the rest of his family...[(^.^)...i'm just being playful...] i don't really like the characters because they're hurting squall but otherwise i think they are great OCs..i wonder if they're part of something not very lawfull..like criminal stuff..perhaps....

One word: HOT. The people bitching about rape scenes? Screw 'em. I personally can't get enough. ;)

Omg, so many chapter updates happened without me knowing! Though it was nice to get to read 4-5 chapters in a row! lol.. I like the turn of the story, it makes it exciting and interesting. I also want to see Seifer come back soon! T_T I was just wondering.. have you ever considered doing an email updating list?