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***Warning: rape, drugs, abuse***
***Notes: I know some of you has been howling at me not to do anything too bad to our brunet. Sorry guys, this was planned a long time ago and is more or less vital to the story. I’m really sorry to put some of you people down and hope you don’t lose faith in me and the story.***


I don´t really understand how a FUCKING RAPE SCENE is vital for the creativity and developement of your story.
I'm not surprised though, it is just nasty to express it like that. And you are right.... I feel kind of disappointed, but kehhh you know. It is your story, so whatever.

I also hope this does not become repetitive. I don't think it will also help with the story-line. I also really hope that this wonderfully written story doesn't become the typical rape-victim-saved kind of story.

Anyway I also hope that Seifer comes ASAP. It is imperative lol.

Read you soon....... Update rellay soon please.

Poor Squall :( Yes, Seifer does need to come back soon, he's an ass for leaving Squall to deal w/ his brother. I am confused by one thing though, you make it sound like Squall has been raped before, has he?

First of all sorry it took me so long to read and review! I've been busy with university! Now, WOW! Omg my heart was like thumbing fast at reading this chapter! Squally! It was excellent though, now many questions arise! I hope Seifer appears soon in a surprising way! His past seems to be quite myseterious and I like that a lot! I'm going to read more now! Well done!

Really nice chapter! I agree, snake, snake! I love it that Seifer has a brother like that though. I had never imagined it would come to this! I love the idea! I find it very interesting that they have similrities! Btw nice names! Seraph and Serano! Seraph I like more. The son is an idiot lol. I hope Seifer didn't run away, I don't see him ever doing sth like that since everything revolves around Squall for him. There's gonna be a sequel yes? I love this story. I'm going to read more now ;-)

Yes, I admit that was hot!But snif snif for Squall, I think it's better Seraph used the aphrodisiac because otherwise Squall would be suffering more! And yes I agree we need Seifer back! Where is he!? Well done for the chapter, I like the plot a whole lot and I think you keep evolving for the better! Please update soon!

Wow! That was... wow...

I knew it was coming. I saw it coming, I really did, but I still found myself speechless. Wow, once he comes down from that though, he's gonna be really pissed, really embarrassed and really ashamed.

I agree though! bring Seifer back!

As for offending people with the scenes, honestly it's your story; you do whatever you want with it. If it involves rape, then let there be rape. I'm glad you decided to put it in there despite people protesting and saying they didn't want you to do it. After all, it's an emotional torment that Squall has managed to avoid for the better part of his life thus far; having it happen to him will have a definite affect on him I'm sure.

As for offending me, that's not a problem. It was just telling me to get over it that got to me, and I can understand not wanting to go back. I'm glad that you're taking what I've said and utlizing it to make your story even better. It's great that I was able to help, and I still will, that is if you would like me too :D

I'm a little disappointed that the scene was cut short though; there were all kinds of tools that could have been used, but that isn't to say they weren't; Squall could have just as easily fallen into that induced aroused state that Seraph mentioned. Either way, I look forward to the next chapter; I actually squealed when I realized this story had updated.

Thank you _very much_ for the read.
Anon

You're killing me here. ;D

AH! Even though i'm a die hard Seifer/Squall fan I really enjoyed this chapter, especially the sex scene, hotttt as ever! I'd love to see Seifer and Squall take some of that aphrodisiac together! Hottest sex scene in the history of fanfiction!!! Anyway, I do enjoy our little brunet getting tortured ever so slightly. But I really want to see Seifer get tortured as well. I want Seraph to rub it in his face that he fucked his boy toy. And then I want to see Seifer get even.

The power of love....coupled with lust...ah so romantic...

I must say that your story is one of the most interesting "fan-fic" I have found about this particular pair. I really like the way you are developing the characters and the story line, although I know you are not solely focused in this story I would really like to ask you to update more frequently. Readind this fic is really nice, the vocabulary you use is nice, but specifically is the way you can describe the scenes in a very fresh way, making it easy for us, your lovely readers, imagine the scene in our minds, or so I have seen in my case.

I hope you update really soon to see what destiny is going to have poor Squally. Just one suggestion please.... no raping scenes for Squall. No need for them specially to this point in which you already said, they have taken notice in the change in their relationship that is no longer lust-filled but developed into something much more substantial.
XOXO Read you soon.

I'm glad I didn't catch this at the very beginning because I'd probably bug you repeatedly to update. With AU I find many authors take a bit to much creative license with heir characters persona. And despite the limited knowledge of said characters we do get, I do believe you kept pretty close to their original base personalities. I know in AU that is not the point but I find that it's a horrible excuse to toss out a characters personality.

Any way I am really enjoying this story and I believe reading the other story and this you have really grown in your skills. Keep up the good work and post again as soon as life let's you. I'm bouncing waiting to see what happens!!!!