rate_review Reviews

Love it!!! Very well written.

Hmm, interesting. I'm finding that I am rather enjoying this story. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes and how you get them together. Update soon.

I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm already enthralled. I was holding my breath when I clicked to reach the second chapter, beyond thrilled to see you'd updated up to five chapters, but afraid this site would give me more grief and show me some page error thing again. I was so psyched when it worked, and now I can't wait to continue reading. It's a great story so far.

You write beautifully and your grammar is a refreshing change from most of what can be found on this site in particular. It's a wonderful adaptation of the Hallmark family film that felt too cheezy even around Christmas. I am eager to read more and see how Squall and Seifer will progress together.

YPU MUST CONTINUE WRITTINGGGGGG!!!
It is a really interesting theme between those two. I like very much that you didn´t changed the characters of Seifer and Squall too much.....I hope to read more of you fanfic soon.
I also like very much your writting, it is relaxed, well made and easy going.

Wow, I'm amazed to find myself actually enjoying this. Usually AUs are just...bleh for me, but this one is really special. You write very well and are careful with grammar, and have kept me very interested to see what new turn this relationship will take. Give in, Squall, give in!