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by suixcausa

schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rotfl
fitting that the oldest of the friends is the only one who really knows what's going on
but hey she wasn't a teacher for nothing
oh and YAY finally someone who agrees with me on the "there's no way Squall, who was so pissed at being appointed to the position, and who seemed so confused as to why everyone looks to him for leadership would keep the position of commander" despite his "follow orders" background you can't tell me that the boy dubbed troublemaker doesn't know a way around the rules
news flash: people who memorize the rulebook usually do so to know HOW to get around them not to follow them.
person Beca!
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh em gee, lmfao! That was too awesome, haha, seriously, I was cracking up over that "lovers' spat". It's so them! xD

Beca
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laughed - thanks I needed that. Very good even for sad OOC plot bunnies you murdered before their time. LOL!
person RentaiKitten
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start - love to see more - especially the arguing SxS
person Sekre
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, love it!