rate_review Reviews

Quite entertaining, although you may want to go back and make sure the spacing is correct in the first couple chapters. Some of the words kind of ran together.

I really enjoyed this story! Hilarious stuff, couldn't stop reading it. Excellent work, hope to see more of you in the future.

Fantasic, brilliant and every other word that describes how excellent this story is - you've got the characters totally right and Squall OOC-ness is played to perfection!

Keep em coming, please!!!!!

Nya nya nya!!
updates!@!!!
come on!please, i wanna a scene between Squall and zell!!

Hey Z! Sup? It's Tori, droppin ya a line. Hey, you said that if you reviewed mine that I should review yours. Well here goes. *takes a deep breath*
I found it hilarious that Zell and Seifer came as angel and devil. lol. The plot was extremely original, I liked it. I myself have never come across an idea about a spell or something. Anyway, maybe you should go back and proof read.
“Can you believe how many we’re gonna be?" wth is that? XD There were also many laughing moments with misused words. For example, "He took a zip of his punch." LOL I can't help but be tickled everytime I see that. All in all, I liked it and now I'm goin' to read Magic of Valentine I think is the name.
~Tori Singer

Oh I loved this - very funny. Squall in that get up, LOL. I really enjoyed it.

It was great. I was pretty sure I read this somewhere and by the end I was 'Of course it was that fic that was funny but no hot scences.' Althrough just picturing Squall in that sure made up for the lemonlessness. Can't wait to see Magic of Valentine.

I'm so glad you're on AFF because it reminded me that I had two chapters of Magic of Valentine to catch up on. :D Exceptionally hot last one, by the by.

Do keep posting here!

No.. continues it. It's great and I want to read more.

I liked it. It was cute and now I'm left wondering what exactly got into Squall. I hope this isn't it, hopefully there's more.