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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha ha! I guess you will get bore with my comment soon. Love the Kimono one. But the others are aiso good too! I have the funny image of Nero wipe Weiss out of that kimono so abrutly that make her spin like a top. (I'm kind of nut today.)
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:3 Me again. Really lovin' this latest batch of updates. I'm still kinda amazed that I love these stories so much, because I thought I would be put off by the gender switching and all.
^_^ You make it work amazingly well though. Can't wait for more!
^_^ You make it work amazingly well though. Can't wait for more!
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha ha, I have to admit I was a bit dubious about a female Weiss to begin with, but you've done a terrific job! You've won me over ^_^
I love how Weiss and Nero care about each other so much. I'm evil and therefore like the chapter with Restrictor the best. Keep writing!
I love how Weiss and Nero care about each other so much. I'm evil and therefore like the chapter with Restrictor the best. Keep writing!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're update!! X3 I must admit I love the 7th one. You did a good job use Azul's pov though I never immagine how it should be. And I kind of see that coming(the rape thing). Quite sad though but I love it.(I love to see agony was writen to my belove characters. :P)About Azul and Rosso's relationship....it's quite new to me ha ha! The 8th one is sweet tone yet it has a little sadness(of leaving me thinking how they would be if they're not in Deepground.) I like them both.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for crackfics! While the pairing isn't random, the situations definately are. I've only gotten through the first chapter, and other then being horribly depressing towards the end, it was really enjoyable.
^_^ Have to read the rest of them soon.
^_^ Have to read the rest of them soon.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Do you Oreo? XD
I have read you six chaptors and melt in front of my computer right now. So damn intense love.It's good to see Nero having a leading role sometimes since I always think he's not a compietly uke type but just be tame for his brother only. And your female Weiss...is such a tomboy! But was still in character. I immagine that Weiss would be like Rosso in the opposite gender, well...except the blood lust thing.Your story make me start to believe that this couple is a soul mate. There're nothing can separate them, gender or not. They're just belong to each other.>_<
Like I always said before. I'm not similiar to hentai. But I love this story. Oreo would make me like that.XD When I read your first chapter I felt like you were a litle rush. But I understand that since this supposed to te one-shot.(a long one though.) However when I read the next ones they made me giggle all the times. Love your style and the way you write an atmosphere between them and...the love scenes unquestionly! XD And those small one-shots kind of relent a tragic at the ending a little.(So I was happy when I read them.) And I think your writing skill developes so fast. Every next ones seem better than the last in term of language use.
Since I already told you about the mistakes and I didn't find the others.
I'm waiting to read your nexts! ^_^
I have read you six chaptors and melt in front of my computer right now. So damn intense love.It's good to see Nero having a leading role sometimes since I always think he's not a compietly uke type but just be tame for his brother only. And your female Weiss...is such a tomboy! But was still in character. I immagine that Weiss would be like Rosso in the opposite gender, well...except the blood lust thing.Your story make me start to believe that this couple is a soul mate. There're nothing can separate them, gender or not. They're just belong to each other.>_<
Like I always said before. I'm not similiar to hentai. But I love this story. Oreo would make me like that.XD When I read your first chapter I felt like you were a litle rush. But I understand that since this supposed to te one-shot.(a long one though.) However when I read the next ones they made me giggle all the times. Love your style and the way you write an atmosphere between them and...the love scenes unquestionly! XD And those small one-shots kind of relent a tragic at the ending a little.(So I was happy when I read them.) And I think your writing skill developes so fast. Every next ones seem better than the last in term of language use.
Since I already told you about the mistakes and I didn't find the others.
I'm waiting to read your nexts! ^_^