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by ArchNemesis

person Anon
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Giggling* Vincent is a naughty boy, isn't he! I like the teaser for next Chapter!

So far I love this story, keep up the good work! And Please, please update soon@@ or you'll make me cry.
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, I have been following it ever since you began it a few months back. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, another awesome chatper!

As always can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT....Go Sephy slice him to bits!^^
person Lauren
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Weird cravings to being bullied by that idiot, Cloud has a hard time being pregnant. And I feel bad for Sephiroth (he has to endure all of these problems).

Keep up the good work! :D
person DiminuitiveSeme
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLZ UPDATE SOON! NOOOO CLOUD! Seph's gonna be PISSED!!!
person squallpaine sephirothpaine
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG>
Please update ASAP!^^
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE DONT LET THE BABY DIE!!!!!!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
I'LL DO ANYTHINGGGG!!!!
person Ann
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The man Hojo had intended to make Cloud pregnant wouldnt be Himself would it?..Eww

Hehe i really like your story and wish them well^^
person Beatrix
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww...Cloud you have no choice in the matter^^

OH MY GOD!!!
i shouldnt have read the teaser!!
What happens? WHAAAT???