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by ArchNemesis

person monchy
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooooohhhhhh.... love this fic. hard to find these kind of fic that has a decent plot and your writing is good. update soon!!!!
person squallpaine sephirothpaine
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I wonder how Sephy will ask Cloud the question! As always I love your story and I'm be waiting for the next chapter.(wink)
person DiminuitiveSeme
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND HAPPY NEW YEARS! *throws confetti* I LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND NOW I'LL BE GOING CRAZY lol! YOU ARE MY GOD! YOU GOT ME INTO THIS PAIRING YAY! *give you pockey, a cloud plushie and a seph plushie* YAY!
person Metis
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hah! I LOVE it when some moron mouths off when the object of his drivel is standing right behind him! I Hope Vincent is Sephiroth's father. Will he get involved in the later story I hope? I wonder if Cloud will flee to Nibleheim. I wish the two of them would go and discover a new continent or something and live there until Shinra's an ugly fading smirch on history...yeah right.
person Metis
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoohoo! Vincent's coming! Trash Shinra! Melt Hojo! Shake sense into Gast! HEEEEEEEEE!!! An most interesting version yes it is!
person squallpaine sephirothpaine
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was worried there for a second about what Sephy was going to do. Glad to see Zack "slaping" some sence in Sephy. ^_^ As always, Can't wait to read some more!
person Lauren
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness Zack talked some sense into Sephiroth. It's about time the man learned that you have to take care of your consequences!

Nice job! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
person squallpaine sephirothpaine
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VINCENT!XD Oh ya, I can't wait to read all the naughty stuff they will be doing! ....so some one is stalking Cloud and Seph.....I hope they vidoe tape some nice yaoi action! XD As always Love your work, I'll be waiting patintly for the next Chapter.
person Lady Shinigami
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was WONDERING if there was a special meaning to 'SG1', since it seemed so silly to just drop it in without an explanation. Like I said, I couldn't figure out what it stood for--all I could come up with was 'Sephiroth General' (the '1' was obvious, since nobody's better than he is), which I guess COULD work if Sephiroth was General of the SOLDIER division and there were other generals of the average grunts. But yours is definitely (more) cleverer.

The evil jerk at the end is Montgomery, I'm sure of it! So far, he's the only one who'd have a halfway decent grudge against Cloud.


~LS
person Lauren
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for replying to my question! Made me very happy!

Wish there were more scenes of Cloud and Seph lovin', but oh well! I like how Gast is in the story, and Vincent too!

Keep it up!