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by ArchNemesis

person Kumoriko
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was just browsing through stories and came across this one. The story and all the emotions you have captured Family is amazing. I couldn't leave my laptop I was so caught up in the story. You guys have done a wonderful job and as I read the latest chapter, I begging for more. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

On a side note: I have just finished reading 'Demons and Devils' and I just love it.
I love your work both you Nemsis and Co-writer Mitts. Keep up the wonderful work =^.^=

Sincerly,
Kumoriko
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a very hollow victory. No scratch that it sucked. You should have let Sephiroth kill Lazard and get it over with. I can't see Sephiroth just letting him walk away. I did like the twist with Lazard's absolute jealousy of Rufus and the real reason he went after Tseng. Honestly, since you let him live, I think he should develop a very unhealthy obsession with Tseng and Tsume, kidnap them both, and attempt to become Rufus or something. Then again that would be weird so forget it. It'd still be interesting though.

You also need to kill Hojo soon. He's getting on my nerves. I personally think the triplets should do it then go run amok. I'm sorry if this review is harsh but I'm PMSing and quite frankly don't give a shit.
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! So much revealed! I have to say, my favorite was Yuffie and Tseng, though. I look forward to more with them. Poor Tseng, those Remnants (it was them, wasn't it?) hurt him!!

One thing though...you had Zell taken out with one blow? Tsk. I realize you had a ton of people to keep track of, but one blow?

:-)
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm ecstatic Cloud and Sephiroth are finally together again. But poor Tseng. He's not even fully aware that he just miscarried. I feel like crying. *sniff*
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cool Speh's kicking ass and puts the Garden gang in thier place! and pleeeaaasssseee don't you dare let Tseng die i'll won't forgive you and neither will Tsume!
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
at the teaser bout time Speh gets to balamb garden. please kill Quitis and Lezard in the next chapter! i'm getting tired of them.
person wackybat
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw more please... I've been waiting forever.... when is cloud gonna come back.... I WANNA KNOW WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN! Please and thanks you!
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna make sure I'm grasping something properly here... so in this way of looking at things, Kadaj, Loz, and Yazoo are technically Cloud and Sephy's kids? I'm a interpreting that correctly?
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAACCCK! It's been a while since I've read this, but I'm pretty sure that Tseng was pregnant. It would just be so tragic if he lost the baby. And Aerith and Zack are so adorable together. Thanks for the updated.
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You...are EVIL! Both of you. No offense to Zack and Aerith but I couldn't give a rats ass about them at the moment. I want to know what's going to happen to Cloud and Sephiroth. Then you had to go and leave that wicked teaser for the next chapter. Now I'm all worried about Tseng and his baby. I'm also worried about the triplets. It's not their fault that hojo raised them. And I wonder which mother they are looking for. Cloud or Jenova? I only hope that if they are looking for Cloud it's with the best intentions and that they arn't planning to deliver him to Hojo. I really love this story but could you have been any meaner with this chapter. I better see an update soon.