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wow ^_^ Clouds little baby is so cute ^_^

I wonder what will become of all those test tube babies..........I hope they don't die or anything^_^

Gloud run.......(pray that Cloud makes it safly with the child)

Thanks for the update.

yay!!! You've made my day! this line had me in stitches!

“VALENTINE! GET YOUR FUCKIN’ ASS IN HERE RIGHT NOW AND EXPLAIN WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF HICKEY IS THIS!!!”

lmao!
And now for some guesses as to what happens next...
Cloud is obviously in labour and hojo obviously sent sephiroth on that mission possibly with help from president shinra. Oh and tseung is obviously pregnant again...^^ I'm so happy...........^^ i love this story!!!^^

OMG!!! An update!!!! and just in time for Christmas too!!!! im so excited about the next chapter!! will we hear anything about rufus and tseung though? it sounds like we're almost back at the beginning.....i hope the next update is soon!

Oh my god! I just have to know what happens next! You can't just leave me hanging like that! *nods* Especially when it's my first Cloud/Sephiroth fanfic! But... YOU HAVE SO CONVERTED ME TO TSENF/RUFUS. *races off in deranged fangirl mode*

Xylia: Uhh.... I'll finish up for her then... summing everything up, Kat loves this story and is excited to read more. *looking at it* In fact, I may read it too. But later.

Ok, I have to say that there are some points of this story which are a massive disappointment to me, but all in all I am really enjoying this story. I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter, so hurry up!! I can't believe its this good! I usually can't stand MPREG stories, but this one is pretty damn good. Anyways, keep up the good work! And yes, obviously Tseng is just like Cloud. Write more!!!! Soon!!

Wow...never in a million years did I think I would be so into a male preggers story. But yeah, I'm lovin it.

Two little criticisms from a nobody:
1- "pregnant lover". You use that phrase, or a similar combo of those words a lot. Mix it up a little. There are some very colorful ways you can put it, he's a pregnant guy. Go nuts.
2- Cloud. His estrogen levels are through the roof but I wish he would man up just a lil. But he's a very very sweet Cloud, and I'm enjoying the way you're writing him, but like I said.. a little more masculinity wouldn't hurt.

But yes, can't wait for the next chapter. ^__^

Nice, I just love this story and as for Tifa being the
bad guy, that would be something new. I think you
guys should step up your game of evil with her and
wipe out those emotions she has for Cloud, cuz' they
make her seem more hurt then bad... Anyway, like I
said I love the story and keep up the good work.

waahhh gimme gimme gimme!!! just a quick comment on the whole Hojo/seph thing; Hojo could never EVER EVER be sephs father! not in a million years so there! for one thing, he might have treated the poor man like shit from the moment he was conceived for knowing it wasnt his child. (my POV anyway) and i really like the tseng vincent thing, as there is already so much attention for the cloud/seph relation, it makes a nice change in pace!
keep up the great stuff!

Mitts, do you by chance also work with Hakucho? you can answer me on my email, Nickkroon70@hotmail.com if you want.

This is a great chapter please continue writing it and post again soon.