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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My mouth was gaping when I read the third chapter. For a moment, I was convinced Seifer would rape the newly 'revived' Commander. I'm still not convinced it was consensual, no matter the bodily reactions.
The lemon was as it should be. =D Nice work, once more.
But if you're going to be in a writing competition, why not put these on hold for a little while? Your regular updates will be missed (greatly!) but you don't have to put everything aside to please us, greedy fanfiction fans. Best of luck.
The lemon was as it should be. =D Nice work, once more.
But if you're going to be in a writing competition, why not put these on hold for a little while? Your regular updates will be missed (greatly!) but you don't have to put everything aside to please us, greedy fanfiction fans. Best of luck.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. Bliss. Pretty boys with more issues than the London Transport service. Can you make Seifer cry and offer to let Squall kill him if he feels wronged or something? I don't know why but an angry angsty Seifer appeals loads. Love this story, its my fave already!(also could Seifer bottom eventually? He always seems to come out on top which isn't fair on Squall's butt! I eagerly await chapter 4 let me know when its up pretty pretty please with a Squall on top? (bad joke I know)
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow after writing that review i had a manga style nosebleed. The bishies are too hot and so's the writing!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Steamy chapter, I like how you're working in Squall's responses intertwined with his remembered-somatically, anyway-time with Seifer. Nicely done! I'm really loving this fic, and it's just so cute to envision Squall with cat ears and a tail. It fits him a little too well, I think! Eager for more!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY SOOO good, yay love the smutty goodness, altho intersted to see how can get squally to deal emotionaly with it physically can be easire then emotional exspcailly with the stoktic brunet.. always waiting for the next update
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woohoo! Please keep the ears and tail even if he turns back to normal mentally! So cute! Keep it up. email me when you get chapter three up, and fluff is especially sweet, like candyfloss!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! It's been a while since I've been that captivated in a FFVIII story! Thanks for bringing me back to this fandom!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really took my breath....heart....brain....everything away from me with this beautifully written story. It is an excellent plot, brilliant interpetation of the characters and so damn original way of messing with Squall and Seifer....my favorite pair of FF.
I love in the writters when they don´t want to put on hold their stories, this shows how trully good and persistent they are, so I also congratulate you for that.
I always end my reviews with "hope to read you soon", but with you I want to say
I am going to love reading you soon.
I love in the writters when they don´t want to put on hold their stories, this shows how trully good and persistent they are, so I also congratulate you for that.
I always end my reviews with "hope to read you soon", but with you I want to say
I am going to love reading you soon.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I love this! Squall as a kitten and having to be dependant on Seifer? Great. Also, I really like the way you're writing Seifer, and how he's not automatically gung ho about the situation and like, "I love him!" Because you know that wouldn't be how it would happen. Anyhow, can't wait to see what happens next! Great job!