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for Somatic Memory

by DB2020

person Imawilburd
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love your ficts and this one is soo awesome I love it!!!!

I had forgotten that you had said kitten boy for your next ficlet, and when heard Squall was unrecnizable was like oh shit... and then the ears and tail and eyes widen and start laughing.. great Fic soo glad to read it cant wait for the next chapter~~
person Brittny
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is completely different, but I love it! Squall as a cat is quite interesting to visualize and funny at the same time. So far this story is becoming sexier by each scene. Can't wait for more... X3
person margyy
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is really greaT! I love Squall as a kitty, and Seifer haveing control like that ^__^ I cant wait till the next chapter! PLEASE update soon! ♥
person Zillah
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has me lauhing and crying at the same time. Laughing at the thought of Squall using Seifer as a constant humping pole, crying for Squall stuck in the shower.

It's a really unexpected turn for you as an author, but I trust that you will be able to bring this to a good end.
person kikvws
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I love this. You always nail Seifer just perfectly; I can so easily see him reacting this way, and even his internal monologue just fits so well with him. Deep down, he's a nice guy, but that doesn't mean he's not an ass, and I adore you for not losing sight of that cocky personality of his! And the view of Squall as a catboy is suprisingly easy to visualize, suspending his reality, but still in keeping with his unwillingness to just play good kitten for anybody. Really cute fic, can't wait for another update!
person Hikaru
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squall back to normal? and miss the fun?? nooooooooooooooooo, well, only if Seifer keep living with the cat... err..Commander, and Squall accept his caretaker in good mood. ^^

Owwww those furry cat ears makes me want to go home and hug my black kitten.

Another excelent fic on your book, congratulations!!!!!
person Lady Shinigami
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
. . . I wish I knew what to say. I mean, it's really well-written and nice and long--BIG pluses--but . . . I can't articulate my thoughts on it! I'm so shocked/awed/delighted that I really just DON'T know what to mention first. Well, anyway, it's REALLY good and I'm definitely squealing for more in this corner. More soon?


~LS
person Dracoqueen22
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hwa ha ha! I love it! This is ingenious, original, so great! I love reading Seifer's POV, especially when you write it and this... I find it so credibly amusing. I can't wait to see where else this goes and what not, especially after Squall manages to change back.
person Elx
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. ;] Although I find it sad that Seifer is in denial, and that Squall wouldn't remember any of it, I'm glad that you wrote two great chapters so far! Now, I'm surprised that Squall wasn't exactly jumping at the idea of a jerk-fest (but who would? he's like a naive baby!@), but yeah... Great job so far. I don't have much problems besides the fact that Seifer isn't pronouncing that he's Bisexual yet. Hah.

~Elx
person Jolis
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay you have more stories! I haven't read it yet... but it makes me happy because I know you write well ^ ^ Considering I've read all your fiction and I kinda... 'obsessively' watch you *cough*

But it's a good thing :3 I thought you needed some early love so maybe others will see how awesome you write, if they don't already. *shame on them!*


Off to read now though ^ ^ Keep it up, please! <3


~EMB